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RELATIONSHIPS
Relationships are like jewelleries-some sparkle, some shine, some stays while some corrode with the test of patience and time. But each relationship is new in its own way and their uniqueness is what makes it extraordinary.
There is a complication in every relationship out there. Let’s be honest relationships are a tough one sometimes. It takes perseverance and dedication if you really want to make it last and one more thing no relationship is ever a failure. It’s just the power you put into which actually makes all the difference. Isn’t it great when you have a partner around you to share every experience every single emotion that you go through? There are many friends of mine (mostly male) who want to share things and by things I mean every emotion but they don’t have a dammed person to do it with. People with and without relationships all are unsatisfied but exceptions are there. Some singles are contended while some people want to be single. It’s a messy world out there.
It’s like chemistry this relationship I mean, bonds develop sometimes covalent and sometimes ionic-new bonds keep on happening then it becomes strong and when the soul connects to another soul it’s like even when the bond breaks some parts still mingle around each other and when it’s the ionic bond they can easily break with a little force. But that is the beauty of relationship it takes patience and a lot of hard work. It doesn’t end on the initial phase of impressing the other person it stays just forever till the relationship is happening. It’s like a mission but a secret one (wink).
But there is one magical word called LOVE that comes with exceptions and truly and sincerely it runs all the bonds and relationships out there-be it the bonds of chemicals or the people.
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After reading this article, I also wanted to meet and communicate, maybe there are people who have something that will make me happy?
There are lots of things that contribute any relationship to be last longer. However, some things are crucial which are mandatory to have in a relationship. So, let's discuss them one by one:
1. Respect: It's a mandatory thing without which no relationship can survive. Both the partners should give and take respect.
2. Trust: You need to have faith in your partner. Relationships with trust issues have zero chance to grow. Trust is the biggest factor in your relationship that plays the most vital role to continue your love with your partner. It brings happiness as well.
3. Compromise: The third biggest point which you should have in your relationship is compromise. We all have to make compromises in our life and we do the same. And the same thing also applies on your relationship. For example, if your partner doesn't like watching movies in the weekend but you are fond of watching the first day and first show, then sometimes you have to make compromise with your feelings, but not all the time. The same thing also comes from your partner’s side.
4. Compatibility: You both should share common interests and fun time together.
5. Care: Couples need to have feeling of careness in their relationship. It can strengthen the bond of your partner with you.
6. Love: Of course, you need to have love in your relationship. You both should love unconditionally with each other.
Hey, tiyu! Scythe here to do a quick review
What I liked:
1. I liked how you compared relationships to jewellery, I understood the part about "some sparkle, some shine", as that is what jewellery can do, along with a relationship but this part: "some corrode with the test of patience and time" confused me. Jewellery can corrode? (I'm not too sure about Jewellery so if it does, then I'm sorry for asking.)
2. I loved the informative tone of this piece!
What I disliked:
1. This last line doesn't really make sense.
First of all, the meaning.
You say that love is an exception to everything else, basically. An exception even to relationships, which makes no sense; a relationship is formed from love, right?
Second of all, grammar. You've used the words "truly" and "sincerely", which are the wrong choices. This is how it should be written:
Good Job! I hope this helped
Keep Writing!
- ScytheMeister
So, I really like the flow in this story and the way you describe and paint the picture. I can see this being an amazing spoken word piece. Anyways, the only problem with it are some grammatical errors. Nothing too big, just a few places that could use a comma.
The biggest thing that I love about this though, and this is the only way I know how to word this, your 'old school' view. What do I mean? Well, let's just say that not many people these days embrace the fact that any relationship can work or be fixed if you put in time, patience, and as you said, dedication. The fact that you made it clear that you need to fight for love is what really made me love this. Great job, and I hope I see more!