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This is really good so far!I like how you describe her hair as "Her soft strawberry locks." It sound better then red hair. I agree that you could make it ...

This poem made me sad. Especially at the end when it says "because you ran away to the cloud filled heavens." I like how you didn't say because you died ...

I like how you connect what the narrater is feeling to a storm. It is a good way to explain what the person is feeling. I say this to a ...

I like the name Admira! Kind of a weird beginning but once you explained her thoughts it made more sense! It doesn't seem like those people are really her friends. ...

I really like this whole stanza and the whole poem "But when your gone the nightmare begins it's course I feel cold inside when your arms aren't there to keep ...

This poem is odd. First of all the whole which things is confusing. Second first the witch likes him and then she hates him. The feeling are too mixed. It ...

I like this! The line that i really like is "Your far-way dreamboat pulls into the dock" I like how you described her emotions here! I also liked "-a knock ...

If you already posted this whole thing or this whole story then why do you keep putting up these little sections? I read the full one and it was REALLY ...

This poem really confused me! I didn't really understand it! But I like the repetition of one two three four. I don't understand why you put half of the word ...

I don't understand the poem very well! But it was good at the same time! It doesn't teally mean anything to me, but some how I still adore this poem! ...

I like this poem it is really easy to relate to! I like this line "You, that feasts on rotting prey." It sounds like the master is an animal! Good ...

Hi, This was really good! I like how you explained the narrater doing suicide without stating it. You said I was flying instead which is great, I like implied actions/ideas. ...

I really like this poem. The only thing I would change is how the second stanza doesn't rhyme. It is hard to rhyme things with gravity, if you can't think ...

Why is it called idek? I watch this guy on youtube called idek but I don't think that has anything to do with this poem. It was good I like ...

You have very good description! I don't understand what you mean when you say: But it's not just the moon, James, it's you. Also why did you change from James ...