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Hello! Junebug here to give an extremely late review using the YWS S'more Method today! Let's begin... Top Graham Cracker - What I Know This story introduces us to a ...

Hi there! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Hello, I thought this was both interesting and realistic, and I loved every bit of it! Now, lets get on ...

Hello! This poem was a truly dramatic and thought provoking poem, great work! I do have some critiques, though. 1. The quote, A darkness so dim, sounds a bit weak ...

Hello! This is a great poem, but I do have one critique. In the last stanza, you use repetitive writing to highlight the narrator's desperation. While it works, the poem ...

Hello! I enjoyed this poem, but I do have a couple critiques. The rhyming meter is slightly off, as some of the lines, such as the one below, are longer ...

This is great! Sorry, had more but it got deleted when I tried to edit it

Mrytle! This is so, so beautiful and relatable. Sometimes I'm funny. Sometimes I'm fierce. This 100% resonated with me, I get the feeling of being someone now, and being someone ...

Hello! This is a great start to this story, I read it a while ago, but figured I'd post a review now. (I NEED POINTS.) First: During the fourth paragraph, ...

Hello! First I wanted to say that this is a beautiful poem, the imagery is great and the writing is super emotional in the best way possible. I do have ...

Hello! I loved this poem. It was so beautiful and the imagery was truly amazing. Some examples of this include, their hanging limbs, their loose tongues Driving to your house, ...

This story was great, the characters were great and I loved the unique names! Now, lets get right into the review. Introduction: The transition to the game happens very quickly, ...

Wow! This is such an amazing poem. If you don't get an A+, I don't know what's going on. First, the emotion of this poem, despite it being a biology ...

Hey, Mrytle, just saw this. This feeling is truly so relatable, the feeling of being betrayed and all alone. And the full circle of pain. The anger and longing of ...

Hello, Sebastian! This is a great story! I do have some comments, if you don't mind the feedback though. First, in the first paragraph, you use the word "though" a ...

Oh my goodness, this poem is absolutely beautiful and left me wanting more! The quote, "only sixteen when swept in the words of big men and their flying fire", is ...