Jurelixranoanad

Hi, J here for a review. As and OCD sufferer I can relate to just about everything that this poem says, its tough. I like the concept, I of course ...

Hi, J here for a review. K, so I'm gonna break this down line by line just to give you an idea on what to work on. But before I ...

Hi, J here for a review. I have never read one your poems but I have hear that you like to add random capitalization in your works. I like that ...

Hi, J here for a review. First off I really don't think that this is an essay, its more like a sermon that a pastor would give. I would recommend ...

Hi, J here for a review. I like this content, I have never seen a poem about someone sleeping, it was a great poem with a lot of emotion. Great ...

Hi, J here for a review. I'm not sure I feel comfortable reviewing someones Diary entry but here we go. There was a bunch of grammar mistakes, and some places ...

Hi, J here for a review. WELCOME TO YWS!!! I hope you continue to get involved in everything that YWS has to offer. If you have any questions feel free ...

Hi, J here for a review. No critiques needed for this poem, I can't belive only one person reviewed it so far. This poem took my breath away, your perspective ...

Hi, J here for a review. Ok then that ending got a little dark and creepy, so you might want to rate this poem a little higher incase someone gets ...

Hi, J here for a review. I'm not sure if I just didn't understand this poem or it just didn't make much sense, but here we go I'm gonna try ...

Hi, J here for a review. I am so sorry that you had to go through this. I cannot even begin to image what it must have been like for ...

Hi, J here for a review. I feel like every writer in the whole world can relate to this piece, I get writers block all the time so this was ...

Hi, J here for a review. First of for your first poem this wasn't dreadful, it just took you a few lines to get a rhyming scheme going. I will ...

Hi, J here for a review. I enjoyed this poem because you did a good job expressing emotion in a releatable way. My favorite line in this poem was the ...

Hi, J here for a review. I do like this poem and the point it's getting across. You did a great job describing your settings and portraying emotion. Your rhyming ...