Hey there, Eli here for a review! I expected it to be emotional and realistic and it really was, you caught my attention with true story of your own self, things that happen in real life not just fantasies. It really makes each reader think of their own selves and how do they think they even look. Do they like themselves or do they feel bad for their looks? You inspire each person who feels low of their outside appearance to find a new way to look into the mirror and find something positive, to say something good about themselves. To find something they like even. Everything in this work is stunning if we do not talk about minor mistakes which i will point out below. No need to follow each one of them, they are just tips and help.
Good morning!!!(space)I haven't slept at all. I was submerged in the ocean of thoughts,(space)aroused by some pleasant music and got lost in the pitch-black sky with few stars blinking not-so-bright - that's how I spent my night. I am still wide-awake and closing the shutter of my eyes is of no use. I am still far far away from being asleep.(space)My phone has died but I didn't care to charge it up. Then I realized of my unfinished novel but was too lazy to get up from the bed to reach my laptop. It's 12:52PM here, in India, and I am still wide-awake sitting in front of my laptop. You can call me lazy but I still welcome your comment with appreciation and I am thankful for your honesty.
Yes that's me, this is how I define myself according to the world 'Lazy Bone' who spends her time framing her future in her world. I love imagining because imagination is my kingdom where I rule, I am free. No one compels me to behave or to be organized and discipline. I can open my wings and fly wherever and whenever I want. Every pleasant pieces of my imagination intoxicate me. I admire the smell of red roses, wet soil, petrol, pages of new notebooks, morning tea, Indian curry, sandalwood and infinite number of things. Yes I am not ashamed of me. People find me crazy and weird. Why? Just because I am a girl and I love tigers or I like to hangout with girls rather than boys (no offense boys). Yes I had been in harsh relationships and had many crushes at a time. I used to stare at boys even though I was with someone. How can someone stop me from following my dreams? I want to grow independent rather than rich, an inspirational icon instead of being a fashionable mannequin, kind and practical at the same time rather than raising funds (for me it is an another form of begging from rich personalities) for some charity. I believe that charity begins at home so instead of serving orphans, I would like to serve my parents in the first place. I am not..
the one who doesn't believe in charity but the one who needs money for herself first than for orphans. You may call me selfish but yes!!! That's me and I am proud of my attitude. I don't want to get married and have kids. Rather I want to love me and raise some beautiful kids all by myself, be the girl who I want to be, be able to help all the people in the world instead of showing sympathy and giving small amount of penny which may be huge for a day and small for their lifetime. I am not waiting for Mr.Perfect to arrive and take me away with him because I believe that girls are all in all and they do not need anybody to be complete. Girls should grow as independent as birds, as strong as wind, as free as air, as proud as sun so as to shine bright high above everything.
So I just want to conclude that girls should be proud of who they are. Don't get married just because your parents want to or because you are growing old or your partner wants or your friends are getting married. Discover who you are, what do you want to be or what what do you want to follow, where to go, why and how to go. Be the one you see in the mirror every morning instead of being self-obsessed. Freed yourself and fly away from every toxic relationships. Love yourself completely even if you are fat, short, dark and whatsoever. I have Scoliosis (curvature of spine) but still I am proud of me. I am the one with uneven curves and shoulder-blades but this is me and every night I pray and
be thankful to god who has given me enough opportunities to discover myself, for believing in me and provided me enough money to fulfill my basic amenities and giving me a wonderful life and parents. I am not angry to be a victim of Scoliosis anymore but I am grateful for being granted such a healthy life. I never want to go through surgery to get an eye-catchy curves. All I want is to remain healthy and fit, to breath freely, live happily and educate myself so that I can rise high above everything with every new sunshine.
Keep on writing!
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