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Juniper

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Can You See The Lettering?

    Penguin dear! June here! I never noticed this poem before, but I'm glad I found it just now. This poem reminded me of the poem "Who Has Seen The Wind" ...

    Feb 19, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: is it hard to say goodbye?

    Hey there Diva! June here again! Aww *hugs* Such a sad poem, dear. Let's get to work. Okay, generally, it's not liked for you to use smilies in your writing, ...

    Feb 19, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Soulmate

    Hi there break my heart! June here! Your poems are so sadly sweet, dear! There really isn't much to say about this. You have a perfect rhyme scheme throughout, a ...

    Feb 19, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: [deleted]

    Popster! June here! (Finally) ahem, let's get to work on this! Instead, I got some drunk who barely lived in my house. If you could call it a house…but that’s ...

    Feb 19, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Depressionville Hotel

    Hey Dreamer 21! I'm June and I am going to review this for you :). How silly this is! I love how you turned something that is completely unfunny into ...

    Feb 19, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Sea Always Wins

    Hey there Sol! June here! Yay! Another poem by you! This was a nice, refreshing read. I absolutely love poems like this about nature. Like Alyssa said, your stanza length ...

    Feb 19, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Transfusion

    Hi there Timeless! Welcome to YWS! I'm June, and I am going to review this for you. Such a touching poem with so much emotion and beautiful imagery in it! ...

    Feb 19, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Concrete Apocalypse

    Hey there Erratik! Welcome to YWS! I'm June, and I'm going to review this for you. This is simply beautiful! It's so peaceful-- like the person above me said, it's ...

    Feb 19, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Empty

    Hey Desmerize! June here! I'm kind of short on time, so I'm not going to do a nitpicky line-by-line critique here. (Not that that would even be necessary, but ha ...

    Feb 19, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Rigth or Wrong

    Hey Desmerize! I'm June, and I'm going to review this for you! Such a bittersweet poem! Here we go: and when i do just that, • Third line! The pronoun ...

    Feb 19, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Why?

    Hey Karibbean Diva! Welcome to YWS! *shakes hand* Nice to meet you! I'm June, and I'm glad you joined. Generally, the people around here are pretty nice! I'm sure you'll ...

    Feb 19, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Empty Spaces Pt. 2

    Hey Con! June here again! :D (By the way, these reviews pretty much fail since there's little to pick on here :P) The figure stood. In the fire’s light Draper ...

    Feb 17, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Empty Spaces Pt. 1

    Hey Con! June here! Yay! This story looks super interesting! Here we go: Draper got off of his horse and looked around. The weathered storefronts and dry watering troughs told ...

    Feb 17, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: In the Shadows

    I really wrote this in 50 seconds, so sorry. I hope it's alright xD Of course it is alright. Anyway! June here! You get my 100th review this month! Yay! ...

    Feb 16, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Cyborg Story NOW ON Chapter1.2 (edited)

    Hi there! I'm June, and I am going to be your critic for today! Before I begin, Welcome to YWS! It's great to meet you. We have a 2:1 rule ...

    Feb 16, 2009


akdsjfh you know that feeling where you start writing a scene but then you get bored with the scene so you move on and start writing a different scene and then you get bored with that scene so you move on to an entirely different WIP and then you get bored with that so you move on-
— AceassinOfTheMoon