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Re: Can You See The Lettering?
Penguin dear! June here! I never noticed this poem before, but I'm glad I found it just now. This poem reminded me of the poem "Who Has Seen The Wind" ...
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Re: is it hard to say goodbye?
Hey there Diva! June here again! Aww *hugs* Such a sad poem, dear. Let's get to work. Okay, generally, it's not liked for you to use smilies in your writing, ...
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Re: Soulmate
Hi there break my heart! June here! Your poems are so sadly sweet, dear! There really isn't much to say about this. You have a perfect rhyme scheme throughout, a ...
Feb 19, 2009 -
Re: [deleted]
Popster! June here! (Finally) ahem, let's get to work on this! Instead, I got some drunk who barely lived in my house. If you could call it a house…but that’s ...
Feb 19, 2009 -
Re: Depressionville Hotel
Hey Dreamer 21! I'm June and I am going to review this for you :). How silly this is! I love how you turned something that is completely unfunny into ...
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Re: The Sea Always Wins
Hey there Sol! June here! Yay! Another poem by you! This was a nice, refreshing read. I absolutely love poems like this about nature. Like Alyssa said, your stanza length ...
Feb 19, 2009 -
Re: Transfusion
Hi there Timeless! Welcome to YWS! I'm June, and I am going to review this for you. Such a touching poem with so much emotion and beautiful imagery in it! ...
Feb 19, 2009 -
Re: Concrete Apocalypse
Hey there Erratik! Welcome to YWS! I'm June, and I'm going to review this for you. This is simply beautiful! It's so peaceful-- like the person above me said, it's ...
Feb 19, 2009 -
Re: Empty
Hey Desmerize! June here! I'm kind of short on time, so I'm not going to do a nitpicky line-by-line critique here. (Not that that would even be necessary, but ha ...
Feb 19, 2009 -
Re: Rigth or Wrong
Hey Desmerize! I'm June, and I'm going to review this for you! Such a bittersweet poem! Here we go: and when i do just that, • Third line! The pronoun ...
Feb 19, 2009 -
Re: Why?
Hey Karibbean Diva! Welcome to YWS! *shakes hand* Nice to meet you! I'm June, and I'm glad you joined. Generally, the people around here are pretty nice! I'm sure you'll ...
Feb 19, 2009 -
Re: Empty Spaces Pt. 2
Hey Con! June here again! :D (By the way, these reviews pretty much fail since there's little to pick on here :P) The figure stood. In the fire’s light Draper ...
Feb 17, 2009 -
Re: Empty Spaces Pt. 1
Hey Con! June here! Yay! This story looks super interesting! Here we go: Draper got off of his horse and looked around. The weathered storefronts and dry watering troughs told ...
Feb 17, 2009 -
Re: In the Shadows
I really wrote this in 50 seconds, so sorry. I hope it's alright xD Of course it is alright. Anyway! June here! You get my 100th review this month! Yay! ...
Feb 16, 2009 -
Re: Cyborg Story NOW ON Chapter1.2 (edited)
Hi there! I'm June, and I am going to be your critic for today! Before I begin, Welcome to YWS! It's great to meet you. We have a 2:1 rule ...
Feb 16, 2009
