Juniper

Hey there, I'm June, Your friend knows a thing or two about rhyme. Here it flows nicely and doesn't feel forced through the poem because she managed to keep an ...

Hey Miss Storia, Here, you're trying to convey the portrait of a woman broken and fading fast, and I think you have some good ideas within this poem. Stylistically speaking, ...

Hey there, aouther, June here, I think that poetry is one of the noblest and most powerful methods of expression. I like that you tried to outline your wants and ...

Hey there, Miss Storia, I love reading poems that are written about a controversial or present day issue that we face, because it grants me the lens to see how ...

Hey there, forever, free, I'm June, I like this poem because it takes an ordinary, every day object and tells a story about it, essentially giving it a pedestal for ...

Hallo, Magpie, I'm June, It seems to me that you have a creative way of portraying descriptiveness, which I find adorable. I'm not sure how I feel about your opening ...

Hey, Vicky, I'm June, I want to like this poem because I think you have a good idea to work with here, but I feel like the language is struggling ...

Hey there, Secret Journalist, I'm June, I think it's really cool of you to write a poem about a feeling that I'm sure many of us can relate to. From ...

Hey there, I'm June, I really like the theme of the poem you have here. It's very easy to relate to, and the return to the pen concept is a ...

Hey Owl, I'm June, I love the tone you set forth at the beginning of this poem. It's builds suspense, and you managed to carry it through until the end ...

Bonjour, Clarity~ You have a creative way of portraying what I assume is a feeling. It brings to mind something halting, chilling, and dangerous, which I like, because mastering vivid ...

Hi, Gabrielle, I respect the way that every writer chooses to express themselves, especially in times where their feelings are hurt. From a literary standpoint, I'm afraid this poem does ...

Nargles, The theme of this poem rang familiar with me, but even so, I thoroughly enjoyed this. It's simple, straight forward and full of longing. You set a tone that ...

Hey there, PepsiCola, June here, While I can appreciate the length of this poem, I am left with a want for clarification, rather than what I have here. To begin, ...

Bonjour, Pickle, June here, As I promised, I'm going to pick this poem apart to the bone. :) Ready, set, ...no? Oh, well. The problem with this poem is that ...