Juniper

Hey there, Ben! June here (at last :P), and just a heads up -- non fiction is apparently not my strong standing point... Many things are wrong with the contents ...

Hey there, Although the petals of this poem brush the line of cliche, I think that you did a fairly nice job in here. For once, it was pretty beautiful, ...

Hey there, This is interesting. I like the simplistic tone throughout this, but towards the end, your lines become choppy and I think you need to balance that out, perhaps ...

Hey there! I like your creativity in the first line. That caught my attention, hooked me, and made me want to read the rest of your poem. However, I feel ...

Hullo, Ben! June here! Now, I know this is not what I'm supposed to be reviewing, but I want to get all of my poetry reviews out of the way ...

Oh dear, haha. My first impression of this was, "Did Grin seriously just write a poem about him ?" The ending of this is pretty amusing, but I'm not so ...

Hey, I can't really say that I enjoy this one too much. It may have potential but theme of love alone is well too overused for me to appreciate anymore, ...

Hey there! This is not bad! I enjoy how short it is, but I'm not sure that the sand metaphor is as clear as it could be. Think of sand ...

Hullo, Navi, Welcome! June here. :) As mentioned, it's easy to see Whitman's influence on this piece, in terms of stylistic language. I'm afraid, though, that you haven't caught all ...

Kammieyaz, I really like reviewing your poetry. Something about it is oddly pleasing, and no, no, it's not the morbid interest in killing a piece of writing. Your problem here ...

Hello! June here! Okay! This is a good starting point -- you have all of your ideas laid out for yourself, and here's what you need to do. 1. Narrow ...

Hey there, I think that you should take the time to improve this poem, dear. While the description of the guitar here is adequate, you're basically just telling us what ...

Hey there, babygirl12, I'm not quite sure what to say here. To begin, I think that because the theme is a lot overused, I didn't find it very interesting. I ...

Hey Baha, Juni here, This is cute. I think you do nicely with rhyme here, and because this is a riddle, there's not much to criticize. Is this a lion, ...

Hello, there! Kyllorac mentions a lot, so I would highly recommend paying much attention to their review. I like the rush to this -- the longer sentences make the poem ...