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Hey EverySecond, First Impressions: Thought the poem was quite nice, with a very original twist and some great connections to the fantastical side of life, something we always are seeking ...

Hey SummerSunshine, First Impressions: While this is not the epic, action packed piece that so many are looking for, your writing style is clean and realistic enough that even a ...

Hey beccalicious94, First Impressions: Very interesting little piece. A agree with Aley that your choice to write a villanelle is pretty awesome, and that you've done it here, but it ...

Hey TheMarauderBandit, First Impressions: Interesting little poem with a lot of feelings from the writer. Perhaps harder to understand if you're not you, but I think living in Utah helped ...

Hey Aley, First Impressions: Ahh, I love real poetry. This is a great piece, and while it's not quite an Emerson, it's still pretty good. Thoughts: we sat admiring the ...

Hey godlypopo, My Thoughts: Very nicely done, I feel, with the concept and the execution of your goal. I enjoy it because it has meaning, but it's not like the ...

Hey Travis, First Impressions: One of my favorite series are the "Redwall" books, so I'm a little biased towards epic movies about little animals. Super great. All personal interests alike, ...

Hey Dracula, First Impressions: Well, it seems like a direct "fan-fic" of the television show "Merlin," which is mostly because it's the legend of Arthur, and you can only write ...

Hey UriahElroy, This review will be a little different then the others I've done, mostly because this is a piece that doesn't exactly fit into Creative Writing, but also doesn't ...

Hey EmilyRMaiorano, First Impressions: Nice little piece with some intriguing thoughts. Perhaps a bit cliche and overused, but still not bad. Positives: Your grin dulling into sepia every moment. Thou

Hey KireThePotatoChip, First Impressions: To be honest, I like the different concepts that you're throwing around, especially with this merge of Fantasy and Sci-Fi, which is always good, if done ...

Hey DarkPandemonium, First Impressions: Finally, some fresh writing that! It's been a while, but this is pretty good. Has it's flaws, of course, but so does every book and every ...

Hey take3breaths, First Impressions: Beautiful piece. Very lyrical and fun, but with some actual good meaning to it. Quite enjoyable to read. Positives: There wasn't anything specific that jumped out ...

Hey again Samk642, First Impressions: A nice little addition to the previous chapter. Albeit it's very, very short, which makes it nice for the purposes of reviewing, but doesn't really ...

Hey Samk642, (NOTE: I was going to review the second chapter of this work, but figured it would be better to read the first, first.) First Impressions: Sick story! I ...