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Joseph George

  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Narrative Re: Val: Precursor

    Hey passenger, First Impressions: Well written! So refreshing. Positives: “Gray,” you’re saying in a low monotone. “The color gray. Wine is just gray. I’m not saying it ain’t alright, I ...

    Jan 3, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Haiku 24

    Hey dystopianmonkey01, here for a Review Day review, Positives: I love Haikus, and well, this is one of them. The sort of sensual, bot not promiscuous nature of this short ...

    Dec 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Drowning

    Hey DestielAndGamTAv, here for a Review Day review, Positives: Simple, and the topic and flow to the end is very obvious and easy to follow. You wonder, as you start ...

    Dec 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: for the sake of art

    Hey Ely, here for a Review Day review, Positives: I love that you've branched out and tried to make art out of the words by formatting them in an interesting ...

    Dec 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: City That Dreams

    Hey alexblackwell, here for a Review Day review, Positives: she had me at 'Hi'! Amidst all the cutting chai time just passes by Obviously the poem has a bit of ...

    Dec 29, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Doodles

    Hey DivergentDemigod, here for a Review Day review, Positives: Denting, bruiseing the paper in the process. To dent paper? I like it, because it's not something we think of very ...

    Dec 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Deleted 73

    Hey Lumi, here for a Review Day review, Positives: Such a unique piece. I usually don't like prose style poetry because it feels blocky and not very clean, but this ...

    Dec 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: One Last Time

    Hey Mem! Here for a Review Day review, Positives: Wow, so sad. I've never been one for these because I'm not a person that gets sad or depressed, which translates ...

    Dec 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Humor Re: Maiden Magic

    Hey Anupama68A, here for a Review Day review, Positives: The misty beads danced upon her brow, As she sang a tune and pebbles threw, In reflections of her blithe young ...

    Dec 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Wreck

    Hey Lupa22, here for a Review Day review, Positives: Wow, this is such an interesting poem. It's hard to do any sort of review on it because it's such an ...

    Dec 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: ​Another Year Passed

    Hey ElvenJedi, here again for Review Day, Positives: Nice flow and good, consistent and simple rhyming scheme. It's clean, and I like that. Nightmares every night, I try to stay ...

    Dec 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Disturbed

    Hey JustOneMorePoem, here for a Review Day review, Positives: So, I sit here, letting the walls speak, The voices reign, as you taunt, taunt my sanity. Speaking walls is a ...

    Dec 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Other Re: Guilt

    Hey Lizard1104, here for a Review Day review, Positives: It has a really fun, whimsical feel about it, even though I can tell that there's a lot that you can ...

    Dec 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: I'm a slave(Edited)

    Hey Matt, here for another Review Day review, Positives: Wow, this is intense. I was kind of feeling that it might be a little too over the top, but then ...

    Dec 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Life Will Leave You Behind

    Hey ElvenJedi, here for a Review Day review, Positives: You cry, you say, just can’t go on When your other half is so far gone. This part was probably the ...

    Dec 29, 2016


Maybe what most people wanted wasn't immortality and fame, but the reassurance that their existence had meant something. No matter how long... or how brief. Maybe being eternal meant becoming a story worth telling.
— Roshani Chokshi, Aru Shah and the Nectar of Immortality