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Re: Val: Precursor
Hey passenger, First Impressions: Well written! So refreshing. Positives: “Gray,” you’re saying in a low monotone. “The color gray. Wine is just gray. I’m not saying it ain’t alright, I ...
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Re: Haiku 24
Hey dystopianmonkey01, here for a Review Day review, Positives: I love Haikus, and well, this is one of them. The sort of sensual, bot not promiscuous nature of this short ...
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Re: Drowning
Hey DestielAndGamTAv, here for a Review Day review, Positives: Simple, and the topic and flow to the end is very obvious and easy to follow. You wonder, as you start ...
Dec 29, 2016 -
Re: for the sake of art
Hey Ely, here for a Review Day review, Positives: I love that you've branched out and tried to make art out of the words by formatting them in an interesting ...
Dec 29, 2016 -
Re: City That Dreams
Hey alexblackwell, here for a Review Day review, Positives: she had me at 'Hi'! Amidst all the cutting chai time just passes by Obviously the poem has a bit of ...
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Re: Doodles
Hey DivergentDemigod, here for a Review Day review, Positives: Denting, bruiseing the paper in the process. To dent paper? I like it, because it's not something we think of very ...
Dec 29, 2016 -
Re: Deleted 73
Hey Lumi, here for a Review Day review, Positives: Such a unique piece. I usually don't like prose style poetry because it feels blocky and not very clean, but this ...
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Re: One Last Time
Hey Mem! Here for a Review Day review, Positives: Wow, so sad. I've never been one for these because I'm not a person that gets sad or depressed, which translates ...
Dec 29, 2016 -
Re: Maiden Magic
Hey Anupama68A, here for a Review Day review, Positives: The misty beads danced upon her brow, As she sang a tune and pebbles threw, In reflections of her blithe young ...
Dec 29, 2016 -
Re: Wreck
Hey Lupa22, here for a Review Day review, Positives: Wow, this is such an interesting poem. It's hard to do any sort of review on it because it's such an ...
Dec 29, 2016 -
Re: Another Year Passed
Hey ElvenJedi, here again for Review Day, Positives: Nice flow and good, consistent and simple rhyming scheme. It's clean, and I like that. Nightmares every night, I try to stay ...
Dec 29, 2016 -
Re: Disturbed
Hey JustOneMorePoem, here for a Review Day review, Positives: So, I sit here, letting the walls speak, The voices reign, as you taunt, taunt my sanity. Speaking walls is a ...
Dec 29, 2016 -
Re: Guilt
Hey Lizard1104, here for a Review Day review, Positives: It has a really fun, whimsical feel about it, even though I can tell that there's a lot that you can ...
Dec 29, 2016 -
Re: I'm a slave(Edited)
Hey Matt, here for another Review Day review, Positives: Wow, this is intense. I was kind of feeling that it might be a little too over the top, but then ...
Dec 29, 2016 -
Re: Life Will Leave You Behind
Hey ElvenJedi, here for a Review Day review, Positives: You cry, you say, just can’t go on When your other half is so far gone. This part was probably the ...
Dec 29, 2016
