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Jonathan.

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Decoder - Chapter 7

    Hello barefootrunner. Jordin here with another review for you a fellow knight of the green room I hope it is of some help to you. Firstly make this bigger much ...

    Jun 3, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Decoder - Chapter 6

    Hello barefootrunner. Jordin here with a review for you (this is also for knights of the green room and also for a knight of the green room.) I hope it ...

    Jun 3, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Decoder - Chapter 3

    Hello barefootrunner. Jordin here with a review sorry for this review being so small. (This is for the knights of the green room.) Hope it is of some use to ...

    Jun 3, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Weaving Webs

    Hello. Jordin here with a review for you (You may be wondering why I am here with a review for a work so old the reason is because it is ...

    Jun 3, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Nightmare

    Hello Tash. Jordin here with a review for you (That you requested from me.) I hope it is of some help to you. don’t make a peep. . Another thing ...

    Jun 3, 2013
  • Short Story » Humor, Fantasy Re: Laughing-Stock

    Hello fortis. jordin here with a review for you I sure hope it helps you out. I walk into my house, painted the exact color of the sky. You walked ...

    Jun 1, 2013
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: Being a Writer

    Hello. jordin here with a review fro you being my mentee I need to do a review on as much of your work as I can. :) First I have ...

    Jun 1, 2013
  • Script » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: Running for Happiness

    Hello. Jordin here with a review for you. I hope it helps you out some. KATELYN What do you mean find you happiness. This does not make any sense must ...

    May 29, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Narrative Re: Pokemon Ultimate Evolution: Episode 5, The Ralts Girl.

    Hello dark: Jordin here with another review for you. I hope it helps. Defeat him and we cole t all him money! Attack you bloaks! ATTACK!" Okay dark this does ...

    May 27, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Narrative Re: Pokemon Ultimate Evolution: Episode 3, A world 50 billion years in The making.

    Hello Dark: Jordin here with a note for you. After I had my clothes ont again, The word "Onto" is spelled wrong you wrote 'ont'. A nearby sigh read: Okay ...

    May 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Horror, Romantic Re: Hallow

    Hello Speak. Jordin/Jon here with a review for you. I hope it helps you out some. Why’d you leave me hallow baby, Okay 'Baby' I do not think is the ...

    May 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: deleted

    Hello Gey. Jordin here with a review that I hope helps you and my team (So called Hot Sauce and should be called Ketchup battling against the sunami tyrants.) So ...

    May 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: At The End Of The Storm There Is Always Light

    Hello .Jordin is here for a review for you I hope it helps you and my team (So called Hot Sauce and should have been called Ketchup.) I hope this ...

    May 26, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Breaking the Wall

    Hello Meth. Jordin here with a review for you and my team the greatest team 'Hot sauce' and it must prevail. Hope this little review helps you out some buddy. ...

    May 26, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: something about you

    Hello jordin is here with a review for you and my team. I hope this helps you out. First thing first this is very small you should make it a ...

    May 26, 2013


In a dream you are never eighty.
— Anne Sexton