JohnLocke1

My general impressions: I just didn't feel anything from this poem. The language seemed too overly complicated for a poem like this. I felt as though the words like "unmistakable" ...

I often hate reading short stories. Mostly because I cannot write them myself. However, you have written a very beautiful story and I applaud you for all but mastering the ...

My reviewing skills are limited, my friend. I can only give you a review purely based on impression. I clicked on this poem because of the title. It drew me ...

Although I am not a poetry reviewing master, I can give you my general impressions of this piece. This poem was very dark and strangely rhythmic. I felt a beat ...

This was a very interesting concept. Your writing was beautiful, however try not to slip into such poetic writing that your words lose meaning. Sometimes, you need to be blunt ...

I wouldn't exactly call this a first chapter. You didn't introduce any characters. You didn't tell us the setting. You did not give us any plot detail. This seems more ...

This is certainly a very thrilling opening. You have masterfully grabbed the readers attention by immediately introducing suspense and mystery. However, why not give this more detail and make it ...

I cannot give a masterful poetic review as some reviewers can. However, I am able to give you the general impressions I got from this poem. I am a lover ...

I applaud you, good writer. I have always found it ridiculously difficult to write in the present tense. It has angered me so! Because of this anger, I have often ...

Your writing is certainly very beautiful. There is no doubt or debate about that. However, with a novel, you have to be careful about using such poetic writing. I never ...

I cannot offer you a grand poetic review like some reviewers. However, I can offer my general impressions of this piece. I thought it was very beautiful. Your word choices ...

This is a very interesting story. The subject matter was moving. The writing was simple, but to the point. I enjoyed the bluntness of it all. In this kind of ...

I don't focus on grammar in my reviews unless specifically asked to, so I won't go into details about the mistakes in this piece. That being said, you need to ...

I cannot give the intense reviews of a true poetic master, but I can give you my general impressions of this piece. I quite enjoyed this poem. It had a ...

This was very interesting and entertaining for me. I don't know why, but I enjoyed the blunt and to the point writing. You didn't dance around. You slapped me in ...