JohnKlue

This is your first Published work. A rather ambitious first outing. This is a rather classic story two rather different people become friends. I am reminded of the movie Luca. ...

I assumed this was going to be a fairy story but this is actual Philosophical stuff. "Life slowly dripping down her spine" I looked up the symbolism of a Spine ...

This is probably not linked to Franz Kafka's the Metamorphosis. However this story dose carry a kind of Hopeless Optimism. I watched a video about Kafkas work and at the ...

A beautiful Goodbye. I can hear this being recited at a funeral, But this is not coming from the Priest or the family or the Partner of the deceased. This ...

Pretty good. Part of me feels like this poem is just a fragment of some greater story. But that may be the point, still the message you'er trying to send ...

Someone in the year 2063 is going to read this and then ask their grandparents if this is really what it was like. This is clearly about Covid-19 in the ...

Very professionally made. At times the narration felt a little inconsistent where I was unsure whether it is meant to be Russels internal dialog or an Omnipresent narrator. But this ...

You are combining elements of Classic poetry with a Contemporary format. The font itself is not like the standard type, it very much is like the text from an older ...

It feels a tad unfocused but I think thats kinda the point. The poem literally begins with the declaration that "Words can not capture" but you are trying to capture ...

Very good. The classic and all too real situation of someone Who is loved that dose not love themself. I came here from your poem "Till you find your glow ...

Good job. A story about the lengths people will or should go for each other. The simple act of being there for someone when they need you. I must assume ...

Short yet still very poignant. I am picking up the theme of falling from grace. "I am but a wilted flower" something that was beautiful that has now died. "Time ...

Wonderful. I will not ask whether this is spoken from experience, because even if not it is good. Part of me dose however think the pain being talked about in ...

Fear is meant to keep us safe, but it can also keep us still. I assume that is the moral of this story. Now butterflies and larva are always being ...

Why did this have to end? All jokes aside I love how this is more or less a poem that explains the conventional writing structure, and then rejecting it for ...