Joelsweet

Even though I'm not a mother, I empathize with this. I have severe anxiety, and although my worrying is about different things (and isn't this extreme), the paranoia really can ...

IMAO This is the most amazingly titled poem I have ever seen. And I read "It's Freaking Spring." I actually am a fan of your slant rhymes, most of them ...

It's Freaking Spring! XD Okay. So, I know this poem probably wasn't meant to be taken too seriously, but I have to say that your rhymes are forced and don't ...

This is a good poem! ^^ I like the way it flows. You have a fantastic vocabulary, especially considering your age, haha. (Reading this, it kind of reminded me of ...

Oh my goodness, your imagery is fantastic. :0 I think this poem captures the essence of humanity very well. It maintained a taunting tone throughout the piece, which helped the ...

This poem was very interesting. I liked the execution, but I felt that some parts could flow a little better, especially that second stanza. Maybe, "That makes me sing And ...

Well, it's "Parodies," not "Parodys," first off. :D I have a feeling that this piece isn't meant to be taken to seriously, haha. I thought they were funny and well ...

This is an excellent poem! What a great message. This made me very happy, because usually when I read a rhyming poem the rhymes feel forced. But not here! Great ...

A couple small grammatical errors, first off. "Long black, soft hair," should be "long, black, soft hair." Also, why did you capitalize "guitar?" Another thing- it's "taught." It should be, ...

I liked how you brought the poem full circle by repeating the first and last stanza. I think the diction and syntax were good, as well as the theme. It ...

Niice. ^^ I like how your haiku diverges from the average one. I think that last line sounds a bit awkward, though. (Not the meaning, just the way it was ...

Very lovely. ^^ You have exquisite imagery when describing all of the things of a fading autumn. My only quip in that some of the rhymes feel a bit forced, ...

This poem is a certainly rambling piece. Which really works, I think, in this case. I got a feeling that this poem wasn't meant to be taken too seriously, from ...

The pacing was interesting, and while it worked in some places, it felt a bit rushed in others. (I don't know if that was the intention, however.) My other negative ...

Hello! So, a few notes here: As a short poem, you got to the point quickly and were able to strike a chord in me. Maybe I'm crazy, but I ...