Jevan13

Nice job methinks. It is not my style of writing but I will be impartial in judgement. The repetition leads me to believe that the persona of this poem has ...

*cries in an undignified manner* This poem was absolutely amazing, tragic but amazing. I...I don't even have anything much to say or suggest as it hardly shows any errors. Nitpicky ...

Hey Sree, good job with this poem. I really like the message and how you conveyed it by using metaphors. It certainly did not bore me in the slightest and ...

This was an amazing piece! I don't know if it's just because I like the night time or because of the more abundant use of descriptive language that I found. ...

This poem was intriguing to me. Great choice of a title by the way. I was actually dragged here the curiosity it instilled in me. So firstly nitpicky stuff: Grammatical ...

The beauty of this poem is rivalled by but a few. The descriptions were fluid, the rhymes were spot on with the poems's rhythm and your diction was superb. Minor ...

Lol. This was quite the humorous piece. I do not know if you intended for it to be humorous as you listed it as realistic, but it was funny. I ...

This was a beautiful piece indeed. I can really see why you favored this piece. However let me get some tiny issues, that may totally just be my view, out ...

This sounds really tragic. The persona has this affliction and she is being hurt by it. Um, it gets into the health category perfectly and my only qualm would be ...

I am in agreement with Vellichor as this poem effectively conveys its message with no need for more wording. I like the use of the imagery, that was vivid. The ...

This poem sets the stage for so many opportunities. When I began to read it, I started to expect alot. So when we ended abruptly it was sort of a ...

Oh. My. Lord. This poem is amazing. It is so tragic and heartbreaking but it has so many emotions pouring from it that it makes us sympathize with the persona. ...

This is a beautiful poem, that is very deep from the soul. I really like your writing, very sophisticated and old fashion. Keep on writing, you are amazing. I love ...

This piece was so touching and I wanted more. This is what I like to feel in poems i read, a genuine emotion. You made me feel as if it ...

Hahahahaahahahahahahha. I totally loved this. Oh my gosh, this was refreshing to read after the hectic day I had today. Wow, who would have thought that the Wizard of Oz ...