Wow. This is amazing!
I love the rhyme scheme and how you use rhetorical questions. I get the impression that the use of the questions suggests that she's either angry or confused which I think matches the rest of the poem really well.
I also like how you describe it as though the oceans have almost abandoned the world and that it's no longer there. It really reflects the idea of global warming and how our lives are taking it's toll on the Earth.
Points: 98
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