JeffRWoodridge

Wow, not only do you have a grasp on love and everything needed for it, but you have a strong enough idea to create a simple yet clever analogy with ...

For your first shot at Poetry, you should be proud to have such a good start. I feel that Poesy in a basic form is often an in-depth message conveyed ...

Poetry often exists to solidify the essence and meaning of things, and this poem is a good example. However there are some things you can improve to better convey your ...

I enjoyed this poem, it has the same views as me so I naturally felt a certain drawing towards it. However, it would be best should I refrain from bias ...

To start with, this poem is very well done in providing a short but sweet emotional experience for the audience, I absolutely became immersed with it. Considering this is a ...

This is an amazing poem, though I agree that it should be under religion and not spiritual, it makes no difference in the heart of a reader simply looking to ...

Since you pulled this out of you're drafts and added it on here I suppose a review isn't all that needed, but I'll still tell you the ups and downs ...

I was there, I could see the scene and hear the soldiers all because of this scene you created, it's stories like this that take me away for a short ...

If the overall feel you want to give the reader is understanding the thoughts and feelings of someone with a depression like sickness, then this goes above and beyond. For ...

This collection overall is very well done, each and every haiku talks about a different assertion of school in a humorous way. And all of this while flawlessly following the ...

Hi Anshira, this poem is delightful to read! I'm certain anyone who reads can relate to at least one of the stanzas as you did a great job with variety ...

I love this story, it had an intriguing plot, and really went above and beyond as far as including the reader goes. You did a great job having variety in ...

I'm going to review this because I like it. I always enjoy the A-B-A-B-A rhyme scheme and this poem especially is fun to read for rhythm and rhymes. The fact ...

No reviews yet? I can chang that! The first poem is okay, nothing too much besides the droning presence of death in the character's future which I personally enjoy. The ...

The theme this poem touches on is deep amd dramatic and the rhythm makes the overall feel entertaining and unique. I especially like the two passages "No Sinchan, No Mr ...