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JC here for review day! This was very well written and great usage of perspectives. You write very well and seem very intelligent. I cannot get over the perspectives you ...

JC here for a review! I like the 1st line a lot from the authors view, It kinda reminds me of J.K. Rowling writing Harry Potter. It's unique i've not ...

JC here for review day! I love the repeating style in poems. It's so good to show emotions and even draws people in. "I am your silent lover, Hidden in ...

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Hey JC here for review day! This poem had amazing flow. I don't focus on grammatical or punctuation errors so I only saw one. I feel it takes away from ...

Hey darlin im here for a review. Just so you review my poem non biased imma do yours that way to so mistakes watch out! I love the whole 1st ...

JC here for a review! First of all yay! cheesy romance that's my true luff :3 I love the style the small amounts of punctuation makes me happy. I love ...

JC here for a review! Let me start by saying I love the style and use it often myself. The short groupings of words, the small amounts of punctuation. It ...

Hey man JC here for a review! The first line is good in my opinion in setting the rest of it up. There are a few other words you could ...

I know what you mean, I especially enjoyed that you used poetry for a comparison. Even I, someone who has written over 100 poems cannot force myself to write a ...

I like this, I applaud the style it's different and no one should judge it. It's unique but still draws the reader to specific parts. The ONLY thing I would ...

Hiya, this is long overdue but heres your review! The first sentence already makes me relate 100%. You see that person online, they plague your thoughts. It often, comes from ...

Hiya ^_^ This is so refreshing, subject matter I write about alot; heartbreak & sadness. Such power and emotions, everything is so clear to me. "You wish I were closer.I ...

When I seen you wrote more, I was like O! shit! I was glad haha You really did well with this chapter we now have some dimension to the main ...

Hiya ^_^ I love the title, first off. I think we learn to deal with broken hearts, until something namly a memory sets them off. In the 4th lie you ...