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Re: That Damn Smirk
Hey! Just hear to leave a quick review. First, I would like to say that you get brownie points for using a picture of Ian Lol. Now let me get ...
Mon Apr 03, 2017 12:49 pm -
Re: The Murder
Hello! I stumbled upon your poem and decided I would give it a review. I'm just going to dive right in your poem was pretty good but you are missing ...
Mon Apr 03, 2017 2:46 am -
Re: Chemistry
Hey! Just Jaylin here coming to leave a review. I honestly loved your poem. It was rather clever to compare life to chemistry. I am not very good at science ...
Mon Apr 03, 2017 2:26 am -
Re: Inspiration: Collateral Damage Left By Love and Art
I absolutely adore this poem. The diction used for this piece was fantastic and the flow of the poem was perfect. The poem was creative and different from the usual ...
Sun Apr 02, 2017 11:14 pm -
Re: Spring's Song
Hey just leaving a review! First I want to say that this poem is great. It is a catchy short poem that I can imagine being recited to kids as ...
Sun Apr 02, 2017 11:07 pm -
Re: Dreams of Ecstasy
Hey just here to leave a review. I will start with the error first. Yes, the error as in one (great job!). During the process of typing the poem I ...
Sun Apr 02, 2017 3:20 am -
Re: Twisted
The poem was beautiful. The rhyme scheme was amazing and your word choice was phenomenal. The topic you chose was perfect and made me somehow just cling to your writing. ...
Sun Apr 02, 2017 3:09 am -
Re: Creation is Love
I personally loved your essay. I enjoyed the word play and how you managed to make your poem flow just enough to keep your audience interested. I also commend you ...
Fri Mar 31, 2017 1:15 pm -
Re: I See You Invisible Man [Flash Fiction]
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Thu Mar 30, 2017 9:24 pm
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Re: Innocence
I love this poem although it is rather short. The poem is great but try using more literary devices to add more intrigue in your work; for example, when you ...
Thu Mar 30, 2017 9:22 pm -
Re: I See You Invisible Man [Flash Fiction]
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Thu Mar 30, 2017 9:03 pm
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