User avatar

JaylinBoykins

DoctorStrange

  • Poetry » Romantic, Fantasy Re: That Damn Smirk

    Hey! Just hear to leave a quick review. First, I would like to say that you get brownie points for using a picture of Ian Lol. Now let me get ...

    Mon Apr 03, 2017 12:49 pm
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: The Murder

    Hello! I stumbled upon your poem and decided I would give it a review. I'm just going to dive right in your poem was pretty good but you are missing ...

    Mon Apr 03, 2017 2:46 am
  • Poetry » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Chemistry

    Hey! Just Jaylin here coming to leave a review. I honestly loved your poem. It was rather clever to compare life to chemistry. I am not very good at science ...

    Mon Apr 03, 2017 2:26 am
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Inspiration: Collateral Damage Left By Love and Art

    I absolutely adore this poem. The diction used for this piece was fantastic and the flow of the poem was perfect. The poem was creative and different from the usual ...

    Sun Apr 02, 2017 11:14 pm
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Spring's Song

    Hey just leaving a review! First I want to say that this poem is great. It is a catchy short poem that I can imagine being recited to kids as ...

    Sun Apr 02, 2017 11:07 pm
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Dreams of Ecstasy

    Hey just here to leave a review. I will start with the error first. Yes, the error as in one (great job!). During the process of typing the poem I ...

    Sun Apr 02, 2017 3:20 am
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Twisted

    The poem was beautiful. The rhyme scheme was amazing and your word choice was phenomenal. The topic you chose was perfect and made me somehow just cling to your writing. ...

    Sun Apr 02, 2017 3:09 am
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Romantic Re: Creation is Love

    I personally loved your essay. I enjoyed the word play and how you managed to make your poem flow just enough to keep your audience interested. I also commend you ...

    Fri Mar 31, 2017 1:15 pm
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: I See You Invisible Man [Flash Fiction]

    Note: This review has been deleted
    IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII ENOURAGE YOOOOOOOOOOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO BUY LADY GAGA'S JOANNE ON ITUNES

    Thu Mar 30, 2017 9:24 pm
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Innocence

    I love this poem although it is rather short. The poem is great but try using more literary devices to add more intrigue in your work; for example, when you ...

    Thu Mar 30, 2017 9:22 pm
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: I See You Invisible Man [Flash Fiction]

    Note: This review has been deleted
    i looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

    Thu Mar 30, 2017 9:03 pm


Look, a good poem is a poem that exists. Any poem you write is better than the poem you don't.
— WeepingWisteria