Jashael

NITPICKS | CHANGED | PAY ATTENTION | ADDED Helloooo, AllieMeadows! Here for a very quick review. Caught a couple of typos, I think: I love how you know when something ...

NITPICKS | CHANGED | PAY ATTENTION | ADDED Hello there, Gheala. Here for a review. It's a good thing that you value each review you get. It is a very ...

Can you catch a falling star in your hand? Can your thin fingers keep a hold of the grains of sand? Can you stop the hate that runs in our ...

Oh my, this is so cool! I love the quick lines. The only thing I'm not sure about is the separation of two stanzas. Maybe you could add a space, ...

Some suggestions, and nitpicks as well: Lies, secrets, gossip s . Are these the words , Why words? They're ideas. But yeah, it's fine. (LOL) But I'll be serious now: ...

I know I saved a spot here, but I need the points badly, and you probably know that. (Oh, Twin, thanks for the cheer! :D) I wondered how many times ...

Hello, m'dear. Nice poem you got here. I can see you really meant it to be funny. It was funny. :lol: OK, there was only one line I wasn't sure ...

Hi, Ish! Haven't been talking to you for awhile now. Came to this poem by accident. (Pffft... it was featured and congrats for that.) I'm glad that I did click ...

Hi, Shiney! Glad to read this poem. I really liked the simplicity of this, with three line stanzas, and the rhyming. ( Yours and floor are familiar. Oh yes, I ...

Hello, UV! Nice poem you've got here. I really like the style you used here. The flow was good, and the words were revealing. I've honestly got nothing against its ...

Hello, dearie. CSI Jashy here for a review. I kind of like your style, but I honestly do not understand the flow of this. I couldn't quite grasp the order ...

First, I congratulate you on being featured. Second, the title changed since I've checked this out yesterday. Third, I'd like to say is: You're a YWS addict. I'm so cool ...

Hi, Dearie! I'm finally here. I'm skimmed over the previous reviews and saw that people already nitpicked before me so what I'm going to do today is comment on your ...

Haha... I really liked this. It was funny, but true. I've been through the everyday stalking myself, too. Like the part where you mentioned that you dreamed of being featured, ...

Hey, Sir. I'm happy to be finally reviewing again. Please do take note that I don't have time to scan the previous reviews. I'm going to say what I wanna ...