Jadefox

Hey, First off I really appreciate the different take on werewolves, because the idea of werewolves has been around for a long time. There were a few grammatical errors. “' ...

Mark another point for another amazing poem from dreamwalker! I've been reading more and more of your writings lately, and they just keep getting better and better. So, another great ...

Wow, that was intense. I really loved this story. It was probably the best I've read all day. You made the character's distress, arguing, and emotions seem and feel very ...

Good story, there's only a few typos I saw while reading it. "'She's visiting mum if your bothered.'" It should be: "She's visiting mum if you're bothered.'" I know the ...

For a first chapter, this was very interesting. Usually a first chapter orients the reader or leaves them hanging. However in this chapter it felt that there were to many ...

Wow, for not writing poetry really often it's very good. The poem is simple, but means a lot in the descriptions. My favorite line must be, "'And the crinkle that ...

The idea is very intriguing and I was interested right away. The details are spot on same with the dialogue, which is not to little and not to much. I ...

Hey, First off welcome to the site! (I've only been here for three days, this being my third) Great first post, well, I'm assuming this is your first post. I ...

Hi Noelle! I really like the emotion you put in through the character, (I'm not really sure if she has a name yet, I probably missed it). The anger. The ...

Simple, yet, beautiful. I'm about to go to sleep, so I thought this was nice to read before bed. Everything is punctuated nicely and I really enjoy the format of ...

Jadefox here, Reading this poem brought a smile to my face with the line, "Cold, uncomfortable; we pull away, forget the awkward laugh." The poem entertained me on the thought ...

Good job on details, at first when you had the girl with arrows I was thinking, "She's going to have Katniss in the story?" But then it turned out that ...

Good start for chapter one! You have me intrigued on what DEATH is. However, unless DEATH is an acronym, there really is no need to put caps lock on the ...

Great description in this poem. The beautifully orchestrated details brought together the whole poem. It's kind of funny, but I didn't know what "tares" was so I had to look ...

First of all, this story is one of my worst nightmares. The feeling of not being able to scream when you try to, or trying to run and hide from ...