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Simple, yet, beautiful. I'm about to go to sleep, so I thought this was nice to read before bed. Everything is punctuated nicely and I really enjoy the format of the poem.
The only problem I have with it is really no big deal, but the font is a little to small. Next time, just make sure you submit it in 12 font.
Well done.
-Jadefox
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I liked it all. you had a good flow with it. you started it well and then wrapped it all together with the perfect words. The font is a little small, don't you think? But I can still make out the words. The commas and the full stops are placed correctly. You used simple words here to narrate your theme. And it sounded good. Everything was well balanced. Keep writing.