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  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Deep Breathing

    Good morning! I relate to this piece so much. I really like how down-to-earth it is about the breathing aspect to anxiety. In fact, I really like how it starts ...

    Nov 15, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: A Fool's Bucket - Ch. 3.3

    HAHAHAHAHA This was so well done, omg. I had so much fun reading this. You did such a great job making it feel like their master plan, giving us a ...

    Nov 14, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 4.1)

    Omg we got SO MUCH GOOD INFORMATION HERE. First of all, I really like how we get into Cassius a bit more and how he operates. He's quite the prankster, ...

    Nov 13, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Twenty Three

    I HAVE MISSED YOUUUU. I am so happy to see these dragons again. At first, this chapter felt kind of like a filler almost or a warmup to get back ...

    Nov 12, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Ice & Magic - Chapter Four

    OH MY GOD SCAR, THE TWISTY FINISH. This is SUCH a huge turn. She's a healer, a priestess, and isn't allowed to be touched by ANYONE. You did hint earlier ...

    Nov 11, 2019
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Tick Tock

    Hey, you guys! It's so much fun writing lyrics when music smacks you with that kind of inspiration. I love the song Clocks by Coldplay, and I would have REALLY ...

    Nov 10, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Ice & Magic - Chapter Three

    YAY! I'm so happy we get more!! I love Nagendra. I love how confident and powerful she is, how intimidating and smart and super freaking AWESOME SHE IS. The fight ...

    Nov 9, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: Unlucky 13 - Chapter 15

    OMG THAT POOR BIRD. I'm so happy you're keeping up with these unlucky birds. So much fuN THOUGH SO SAD, THAT POOR BIRD. D: omg it's 3:13. Did you know ...

    Nov 8, 2019
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Home

    This was lovely! Your imagery is just so beautiful. It painted a brilliant picture of a place I would really love to go to right now omg. The beginning stanza ...

    Nov 7, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: A Fool's Bucket - Ch. 3.2

    Oh, my goodness. The queen and prince aren't on good terms, considering the queen couldn't look her own son in the eye. I'm a little confused as to why the ...

    Nov 6, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 3.2)

    Oh, my word. These two are just adorable. “Stormy, you told him that you hadn’t found any girls distracting enough to pull your attention away from your studies, you had ...

    Nov 5, 2019
  • Lyrics » General, Other Re: Welome back

    Hello! Omg what a hilarious piece. This is such a fun song because you're also establishing a story and characters at the exact same time! It kind of has a ...

    Nov 4, 2019
  • Article / Essay » Culture, Spiritual Re: The Power Of Truth-A Message For Christians Everywhere

    Hey, Ever! This is a very motivational piece with a strong message. There's a lot of drive behind your words, which really helps keep your reader's attention focused on your ...

    Nov 3, 2019
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: for you

    Hi, Pan! This was such a beautiful piece and very much from the speaker's heart. You have an excellent sense of vocabulary, and you handled the rhyming very smoothly. It ...

    Nov 2, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Darkness Within!

    Hi, Neetika! (Love the name, by the way!) I FREAKING LOVE THIIIIIIIIIIS. I have so many things to say about it. I love this piece. It's just so haunting . ...

    Nov 1, 2019


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