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Re: Just wait
Hey! Izzy here for a review! A few things with punctuation, but I am bad at punctuation myself so I am going to move on! A very deep sad poem. ...
Nov 29, 2017 -
Re: trickster
HEY PAL! It's Izzy here for a review! Next time do me a favor and tag me! I think (think) this poem is about someone breaking and saying they were ...
Nov 29, 2017 -
Re: Insert half-decent title here.
Hi it's Izzy and welcome to YWS! I thought this poem/lyrical piece was very funny and I thought very accurate! And some people only see the negatives, or some people ...
Nov 29, 2017 -
Re: i am the fragile china plate lion (no, you aren't)
Izzy here hello hello! I think this should totally be on the spotlight! It talks about brokenness and monsters and AH Very good! There are a few places where it ...
Nov 29, 2017 -
Re: Numb? Not Anymore.
Hmmmm I am just like okay.... I don't know if this is about wanting to leave like, dying, or actually leaving, like a place. Could you clarify that for me? ...
Nov 28, 2017 -
Re: Weird Is Normal
Hey it's Izzy and you know that so let's move on! *looks at previous reviews* huh no one reviewed this before me cool Anyway, I like this because it's you, ...
Nov 28, 2017 -
Re: Dear Friend,
Hi! Izzy here for a review *Grumbles cause she forgot her headphones at home and she has a hard time writing without music* Anywho, I feel like this poem is ...
Nov 27, 2017 -
Re: Tell me this is just a dream
Hi! Izzy here for a review! I really enjoyed this emotional poem! I think you are trying to convey that you are in some type of pain and you have ...
Nov 20, 2017 -
Re: Jesse - Part 5 SMSU Poetry
Izzy here for a review And hello hello Em! These really bring out your character's personality and what kind of secrety secrets they have! "So much is still unknown" that ...
Nov 20, 2017 -
Re: Something More, Something Unique Chapter 4
Hey! Izzy here for a review! I like this chapter, but I was kind of confused when they finally explained what was going on... Maybe make it more clearer and ...
Nov 20, 2017 -
Re: Something More, Something Unique Chapter 3
Heya! Izzy here for a review! I like this, I actually finished chapter four then forgot about this chapter so I came back. I have one question, why does Gram ...
Nov 20, 2017 -
Re: Mark - Part 6 SMSU
Hi! Izzy here for a review! I really have liked these so far and I am on chapter four of SMSU!!!!!!! I feel like this is more about how the ...
Nov 20, 2017 -
Re: Sully - Part four of SMSU Poetry
Hi Izzy here for a second review cause the other one accidently got deleted (oops) I think this is awesome what you are doing with your characters and how you ...
Nov 17, 2017 -
Re: TODAY
Hi! Izzy here for a review! I really like this, and can relate to it 100% Grammatically I am not good an reviewing, but I think it looks okay This ...
Nov 17, 2017 -
Re: Something More, Something Unique Chapter 2
Hey! Izzy here for a review! I really liked the beginning of this story. But towards the end it made little sense. Maybe make it a little more clearer? Explain ...
Nov 17, 2017
