IwillNOTbow2741

oh wow, this actually reminded me of how one of my friendships ended. Anyway, great poem. It's very deep, very relatible. i can tell it took you some time to ...

Wow, this is really good. It's amazing actually. Again, it leaves the reader wanting more and leaves the reader hanging just enough to HAVE to keep reading and not get ...

Well it certantly lures you into the story. (sorry i haven't been on here in forever because of school so i don't have time to review usually but i appreciate ...

WOW! This poem is amazing!!! There is so much detail, I wish I could write like that. It's a beautiful poem. All of mine seem like nothing compared to yours! ...

well I care. the point of living is too find a place of peace. i don't see any point of religion because its full of hypocrites, i don't know about ...

"You're the chapter in the book The one that leaves you wanting more I'm the puzzle You're the last piece I can't be completed without you I'm the flower You're ...

words, what can i say about tthis besides it's........................................................................... WORDY!!!!!!!!!!!! HAHA! i love it :) keep on writting i love your poems

awesome poem, this poem is really cool. i love it especially this part: "But one cold and snowy morning A man finally sees the child Shivering violently, his teeth chattering ...

This is... diffrent from what I'm used too. But of course most the poems I've read are either children's poems or deep dark poems. Anyway, this is an OK poem ...

Who knew a subject as beautiful as the word butterfly could be turned into a poem of such raw emotion. I really liked it. In a way, it shows how ...

Wow. While I was reading this I couldn't help but to think about my own life, hiding everything untill I fell on the point of a breakdown. This is written ...

i love this. "Well it isn't as easy as you thought To make me give in to your hate And I will not back down I will fight until the ...

this is one of my favorite poems by you! if this was published in a book i'm sure other people would view it as kind of an inspirational poem. maybe ...

i love this poem! "I think of everyone at school Who hate me for who I am But the reason I am like this Is all because of them" This ...

This is different than what I usually read in the poems I choose. It's really good, the way it flowed was fast but good. Really good, keep writing!