This is different than what I usually read in the poems I choose. It's really good, the way it flowed was fast but good.
Really good, keep writing!
I heard…
A pin that dropped onto the floor.
I saw…
A speckle of dust on my finger,
I tasted…
A bitter pill on my tongue.
I smelled,
The scent of sorrow,
I felt..
A hole in my heart.
I was...
Dying.
This is different than what I usually read in the poems I choose. It's really good, the way it flowed was fast but good.
Really good, keep writing!
Hey... This is really good... Really really good...and it flowed really nice..though of course I would have liked to read a bit more..But I feel that i's a good thing you kept it short..Well done!!
Harshita:)
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