This is... diffrent from what I'm used too. But of course most the poems I've read are either children's poems or deep dark poems.
Anyway, this is an OK poem even for a poem in this style of poetry. It could be better but if you ask me I'll turn it into a dark poem haha. (If you couldn't tell already I'm not good with reviews). As a reader, I didn't really 'feel' the emotion in this poem it started to come but it never really got to me. But I'm sure you are a great writer by looking at the reviews from others about this poem.
Keep up the good work!
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