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Re: Fried Expectations
Dracula Hi I am Ishan212 and I'm here to review your short story. Your story was based in a background, which is rather unfamilier to me. I'll talk about it ...
May 23, 2017 -
Re: Going Back
Midnightmoon Hi, I am Ishan212 to review your poem 'Going Back' Finally,I managed to find your poem. So let's begin the review. 'Going Back': looking at the past with a ...
May 23, 2017 -
Re: Dear Mr.Andersen
beprepared; Hello I am Ishan212 and I'm here to review your poem called the 'Dear Ms. Anderson'. The poem was about a boy, I presume, who is unhappy, rather angry ...
May 14, 2017 -
Re: Butterfly
Butterfly, Hello I am Ishan212 and I'm here to review your poe|m titled the ''Butterfly." Your poem is about the comparison between a person you love and really care about ...
May 4, 2017 -
Re: The Rings of Saturn
Hi Fortis When I read your 'essay', I thought that either I have been living in a cave or the definition of essay has. changed over time. So I decided ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: Ambitions
Siberfree! Hi! I am Ishan 212 to review your poem 'Ambitions'. Well , you wrote in the promo that your poem has been written with a perspective of a small ...
Apr 12, 2017 -
Re: The Last Mistake
Hi, I am Ishan212 and I am here to review your work. I would like to admit that your title was nice but not your content. In your story your ...
Oct 7, 2016 -
Re: through gandhi's eyes
santiago Hi I am Ishan212 and I'm here to review your work. I want to tell you, being an Indian, when I read the title of your story, I felt ...
Sep 25, 2016 -
Re: There has always been smoke in the air
FeatherPen Hi I'm Ishan212 and I am here to review your work. Firstly I would like to say that your pen name is really nice. Comming back to the story, ...
Sep 25, 2016 -
Re: Memorabilia
MemoryHunter Hi, I am Ishan212 and I'm here to review your work. Firstly, I'd like to admit that the title of your poem,'Memorabilia'was quite unique. I mean we do not ...
Sep 25, 2016 -
Re: Clouds
DubyS Hi I'm Ishan and I'm here to review your work. Firstly, with no intention to offend you, I found your poem a little immature. There was nothing a grown ...
Sep 23, 2016 -
Re: Being A Bookworm
Hi I am Ishan and I am here to review your essay. So here we go; Your essay was about an unique topic 'Bookworms'. They are people who keep on ...
Nov 8, 2014 -
Re: You.
Hi, I am Ishan and I am here to review your work. You chose up a nice theme. The condition of a person after he or she looses his self ...
Oct 21, 2014 -
Re: Saying Goodbye
Hi, I am Ishan and I am here to review your work. So here we go; After reading your short story, I am just wondering that 'What will happen to ...
Oct 19, 2014 -
Re: The Unknown Follower
Hi! I am Ishan and I am here to review your short story. So here we go; First of all your story is in mixed tenses. Somewhere you are saying- ...
Oct 17, 2014
