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Ishan212

Ishan212

  • Short Story » General, General Re: Fried Expectations

    Dracula Hi I am Ishan212 and I'm here to review your short story. Your story was based in a background, which is rather unfamilier to me. I'll talk about it ...

    May 23, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Going Back

    Midnightmoon Hi, I am Ishan212 to review your poem 'Going Back' Finally,I managed to find your poem. So let's begin the review. 'Going Back': looking at the past with a ...

    May 23, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dear Mr.Andersen

    beprepared; Hello I am Ishan212 and I'm here to review your poem called the 'Dear Ms. Anderson'. The poem was about a boy, I presume, who is unhappy, rather angry ...

    May 14, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Butterfly

    Butterfly, Hello I am Ishan212 and I'm here to review your poe|m titled the ''Butterfly." Your poem is about the comparison between a person you love and really care about ...

    May 4, 2017
  • Article / Essay » Science, Culture Re: The Rings of Saturn

    Hi Fortis When I read your 'essay', I thought that either I have been living in a cave or the definition of essay has. changed over time. So I decided ...

    Apr 30, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Ambitions

    Siberfree! Hi! I am Ishan 212 to review your poem 'Ambitions'. Well , you wrote in the promo that your poem has been written with a perspective of a small ...

    Apr 12, 2017
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Last Mistake

    Hi, I am Ishan212 and I am here to review your work. I would like to admit that your title was nice but not your content. In your story your ...

    Oct 7, 2016
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: through gandhi's eyes

    santiago Hi I am Ishan212 and I'm here to review your work. I want to tell you, being an Indian, when I read the title of your story, I felt ...

    Sep 25, 2016
  • Other » Realistic, General Re: There has always been smoke in the air

    FeatherPen Hi I'm Ishan212 and I am here to review your work. Firstly I would like to say that your pen name is really nice. Comming back to the story, ...

    Sep 25, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Memorabilia

    MemoryHunter Hi, I am Ishan212 and I'm here to review your work. Firstly, I'd like to admit that the title of your poem,'Memorabilia'was quite unique. I mean we do not ...

    Sep 25, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Literature Re: Clouds

    DubyS Hi I'm Ishan and I'm here to review your work. Firstly, with no intention to offend you, I found your poem a little immature. There was nothing a grown ...

    Sep 23, 2016
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Being A Bookworm

    Hi I am Ishan and I am here to review your essay. So here we go; Your essay was about an unique topic 'Bookworms'. They are people who keep on ...

    Nov 8, 2014
  • Other » Dramatic, Other Re: You.

    Hi, I am Ishan and I am here to review your work. You chose up a nice theme. The condition of a person after he or she looses his self ...

    Oct 21, 2014
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: Saying Goodbye

    Hi, I am Ishan and I am here to review your work. So here we go; After reading your short story, I am just wondering that 'What will happen to ...

    Oct 19, 2014
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Unknown Follower

    Hi! I am Ishan and I am here to review your short story. So here we go; First of all your story is in mixed tenses. Somewhere you are saying- ...

    Oct 17, 2014


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