Hello Midnightmoon! sorry this review had to be short but I don't have a lot of time so I will do my best
Overall I think your review was wonderful, I myself like a good strong start to pull people in, and you had that! I think one of my favorite lines was "It didn't express the tears that I help back" and everything about your poem was great! I am not good at poetry so I cant say much, but I did not find any problems at all in your piece, so great work! again, I apologies for the short review but life goes on keep writing!
from Gold.
Points: 115
Reviews: 20
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