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Re: He Never Left
Hello this is Innergy , I recommend that you make each stanza even. I find that when I write my poems that way they are much easier for me to ...
Jun 20, 2013 -
Re: I am No Hero
I really like this poem. It is very touchy in a good way. I think you have great potential, I believe we all as human beings have great potential. This ...
Jun 16, 2013 -
Re: The Boy
First off, This conveys much emotion. I agree with FlowerChild that metaphors are necessary in this particular piece in order to get the reader in tune with the how The ...
Jun 16, 2013 -
Re: The Mortal Instruments Poem
Heartwarming and cradling sensations fill my soul when I read this. The colorful imagery is perfect for this type of poem. There is a strong loving bond between the two ...
Dec 23, 2012 -
Re: Who am I?
This poem is somewhat interesting in a sense, but I couldn't really grasp the concept of it. The flow is pretty decent and the stanzas, well, I honestly don't know ...
Dec 23, 2012 -
Re: Twit Ederthon's Quest: Chapter 1
I love fantasies and this is very well written in my opinion. Twit is an awesome name for a character who seems to be "not too bright" I love it. ...
Dec 17, 2012 -
Re: fruit fetus
This is beautiful, I love it. Any piece of aesthetic that is fruitfully created such as this. I may seem to give much praise to every poem I read on ...
Dec 16, 2012 -
Re: I was your secret, wasn't I, you darkness
Hello, I enjoyed reading this. Although I am unfamiliar with this style of poetry I appreciate the update about what type of poetry it is. First off, the emotion of ...
Dec 16, 2012 -
Re: Let me
This is a nice poem. It has feeling and a tad bit of regret as well, but overall it's a nice breath of a poem. It has moments of (I ...
Dec 3, 2012 -
Re: The Truth About You
I like this poem, it's not too fancy and it's not supposed to be. With that being said this poem is not stressed simply because it's a heart felt poem ...
Dec 3, 2012 -
Re: tell them kids to quit whining
This gives me a johnny cash feeling to it which is a good thing. I applaud the scenery within it and the tune of poverty in music that is tough ...
Dec 3, 2012 -
Re: the moon
I must say that this is a great poem in my eyes. The tone of this poem is lovely, in a warmhearted way. The moon is a great symbolization of ...
Dec 3, 2012 -
Re: I call suicide hotlines for the conversation, so tell me something about myself
hello there, i really enjoyed this. It was deeper than mariana trench, it was clothed with beauty although the theme was sorrow and sad. I loved the last line about ...
Dec 3, 2012 -
Re: Dear Ex,
Great poem! In my eyes, I can honestly say that I can definitely relate to this because of the strong and bitter emotion of anger that is a symptom of ...
Sep 7, 2012 -
Re: sleepless
This is beautiful! I mean, the lines in this poem carry so much emotion and the essence of thinking. Honestly, I feel this way everyday even though i'm a guy ...
Sep 7, 2012
