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Innergy

  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: He Never Left

    Hello this is Innergy , I recommend that you make each stanza even. I find that when I write my poems that way they are much easier for me to ...

    Jun 20, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: I am No Hero

    I really like this poem. It is very touchy in a good way. I think you have great potential, I believe we all as human beings have great potential. This ...

    Jun 16, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: The Boy

    First off, This conveys much emotion. I agree with FlowerChild that metaphors are necessary in this particular piece in order to get the reader in tune with the how The ...

    Jun 16, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Fantasy Re: The Mortal Instruments Poem

    Heartwarming and cradling sensations fill my soul when I read this. The colorful imagery is perfect for this type of poem. There is a strong loving bond between the two ...

    Dec 23, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Who am I?

    This poem is somewhat interesting in a sense, but I couldn't really grasp the concept of it. The flow is pretty decent and the stanzas, well, I honestly don't know ...

    Dec 23, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Twit Ederthon's Quest: Chapter 1

    I love fantasies and this is very well written in my opinion. Twit is an awesome name for a character who seems to be "not too bright" I love it. ...

    Dec 17, 2012
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: fruit fetus

    This is beautiful, I love it. Any piece of aesthetic that is fruitfully created such as this. I may seem to give much praise to every poem I read on ...

    Dec 16, 2012
  • Poetry » Other, Lyrical Re: I was your secret, wasn't I, you darkness

    Hello, I enjoyed reading this. Although I am unfamiliar with this style of poetry I appreciate the update about what type of poetry it is. First off, the emotion of ...

    Dec 16, 2012
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Let me

    This is a nice poem. It has feeling and a tad bit of regret as well, but overall it's a nice breath of a poem. It has moments of (I ...

    Dec 3, 2012
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: The Truth About You

    I like this poem, it's not too fancy and it's not supposed to be. With that being said this poem is not stressed simply because it's a heart felt poem ...

    Dec 3, 2012
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: tell them kids to quit whining

    This gives me a johnny cash feeling to it which is a good thing. I applaud the scenery within it and the tune of poverty in music that is tough ...

    Dec 3, 2012
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: the moon

    I must say that this is a great poem in my eyes. The tone of this poem is lovely, in a warmhearted way. The moon is a great symbolization of ...

    Dec 3, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I call suicide hotlines for the conversation, so tell me something about myself

    hello there, i really enjoyed this. It was deeper than mariana trench, it was clothed with beauty although the theme was sorrow and sad. I loved the last line about ...

    Dec 3, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dear Ex,

    Great poem! In my eyes, I can honestly say that I can definitely relate to this because of the strong and bitter emotion of anger that is a symptom of ...

    Sep 7, 2012
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: sleepless

    This is beautiful! I mean, the lines in this poem carry so much emotion and the essence of thinking. Honestly, I feel this way everyday even though i'm a guy ...

    Sep 7, 2012


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