This poem creates a very vivid picture of pain and letting go of someone, when you're not ready yet.
MY FAVORITE STANZAS,
"What are you to do in the dark
When your world is crumbling to pieces and there is no escape?
Do you let your mind run from you
Or do you run away with your life into the darkness?
Falling to your knees, your pain shakes the ground.
Tears roll down your face while you beg for help.
The pain is felt throughout your soul,
The flame has left your body and those eyes have no fight. "
These stanzas create images in my mind and I love poems that can do that. The description of actions really moves the emotions of the reader's hearts.
Points: 435
Reviews: 44
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