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  • Poetry » Satire, Politics Re: An Ode to power

    This review is brought to you by InfiniteRectangles Hello! I'm here to review your poem. I really liked this! It was powerful, and I love satire. I love your style ...

    Apr 10, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Starlight: Chapter 2 (Part I)

    This review is brought to you by InfiniteRectangles Hello! I'm here for another review, and I must say that this story is coming along wonderfully. Each chapter is consistent with ...

    Apr 10, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Elysium - Chapter 1 [Part 1]

    This review is brought to you by InfiniteRectangles Hello! I reviewed you Prologue, and it was quite good, so I decided to check out chapter one as well. I'll be ...

    Apr 10, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Midnight Longing

    This review is brought to you by InfiniteRectangles Hello! This was a really sweet poem! The last few stanzas are my favorite :) I love how you managed to capture ...

    Apr 10, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Near Rock Bottom

    This review is brought to you by InfiniteRectangles Hello! Since this is a long poem, I will be reviewing as I read. You're off to a good start. However, be ...

    Apr 9, 2016
  • Poetry » Review, Other Re: Wonder, Sometimes

    This review is brought to you by InfiniteRectangles Hello! You asked for reviews on how to improve you work, and I am here to oblige. I think you were off ...

    Apr 9, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I'm sorry

    This review is brought to you by InfiniteRectangles Hello! I'm here to review your poem. I like the idea, and it's clear that you feel very strongly about this apology. ...

    Apr 9, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Purity

    This review is brought to you by InfiniteRectangles Hello! I'm here to review your poem. It was very well written, so you made it difficult for me to find any ...

    Apr 9, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, Realistic Re: To Sleep Among the Crows - Chapter I (AJ Long)

    This review is brought to you by InfiniteRectangles Hello! You said this was your first story?? I say, you're quite talented! I've only read a few paragraphs so far and ...

    Apr 9, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Heart of a Warrior ch. 2

    This review is brought to you by InfiniteRectangles Hello again! This is a lovely follow-up to your last chapter. As I'm giving you constructive criticism, I will try not to ...

    Apr 9, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: The Heart of a Warrior ch. 1

    This review is brought to you by InfiniteRectangles Hello! This was a very intriguing beginning to a novel! I was a bit confused in some places, but I'm assuming those ...

    Apr 9, 2016
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Teen Fiction Re: Regret (Working on the tittle)

    This review is brought to you by InfiniteRectangles Hello! I loved this story! It kept my interest throughout and I love you use of imagery. That being said, as this ...

    Apr 9, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Madness in Reality

    This review is brought to you by InfiniteRectangles Hello! I really liked this poem! You had a nice consistent flow, and your rhyme scheme seemed natural. You really captured the ...

    Apr 9, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Starlight: Chapter 1 (Part III)

    Hello, InfiniteRectangles here with another review for you! This is going great so far. You've kept my interest throughout, and aside from a few grammar errors, I didn't see much ...

    Apr 9, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dreamers

    Hello, InfiniteRectangles here with your review! This will probably be a short review, as this is a short poem. Anyway, this was really sweet! I loved how you compared the ...

    Apr 8, 2016


Sea and Sky- both blue. Once, in proposal, Sea turned red. Sky's father- Sun forbade so she wept as rain, uniting the lovers in defiance.
— AlexWrites