Incandescence

Shakespeare was nothing more than a copycat. All of his so-called fame came from the theft of theatrics from the Greeks and the Romans. His style of writing is not ...

This is not in line with what I consider good poetry. It's too abstract for my own tastes, and I think you'll find that abstraction does not create good feedback, ...

Wow. This was more cliche than I even imagined. You took some words and arranged them so they were not in a normal order, but when you decompose it down, ...

Well, here comes Mr. Cynical. This poem was stupid. Fast-paced? Yes. Moving? Yes. Gripping? Yes. Purposeful? Not by any means. It doesn't chill me like the ending tells me it ...

I somehow feel a sense of gratification in knowing that I've spawned some kind of mimicking. Probably not a good thing, though, for you. You have to find what expresses ...

This was soppy and not to my liking--at all. Understand, it was well written, for the most part (but we'll talk about that in a minute), but what really got ...

This was excellent in description. However, it seemed to fall to the bitter clutches of cliche at times. For example: "And it's when my heart was carved in two by ...

Well, this has a nice effect and reads easily, but it doesn't have a point. Like someone said, it'd be nice to hear this whispered, if you weren't paying attention ...

This fell in the realm of mediocricity. The rhythm: perfect. The style: you. The poem: everyone. The meaning conveyed to me was that you wanted some sort of redemption, for ...

This was a myriad of one emotion. For me, this brought the gut-wrenching heart-breaking tear-jerking emotion of disgust. I absolutely loathe these types of poems. You know, the ones where ...

Aah. I must say I thoroughly enjoyed this. Although, I'm not feeling myself today, so that could be another factor. I liked the way you epitomized your relationship in a ...

Well, you certainly have a grasp on rhyme schemes, and there's nothing awkward about the poem. I enjoyed this, but like you said, I didn't retain any great impact on ...

"I watched her hit you without swinging, It was so powerful I saw it in your face." Nice opening line, but the second line needs some definite revisions. Don't use ...

Nothing but misconstrued directions we struggle to keep hold the fantasisies of insecure individuals wishing for lifes of gold "But dreams are what drives us," they say with buoyancy those ...

Death causes grief like snow covers a mountain is nonsensical. As I've said before, stop telling us about what an event does, but how it makes you feel. We're people, ...