InJung15

Hey there FireSpyGirl!! Here for a quick little review! You've got quite a piece here, very descriptive, emotional, and relatable. Thank you for sharing such a piece with us. Alright ...

Hey there ValD!! Here for a quick review/comment! Ok, first of all, amazing job with this story, I can really see the time and effort you have put into this ...

Hey Thediffident, here for a quick review! For a 7 line poem, you've done a very amazing job. I found it quite impressive how just in this short poem alone ...

Hey there, here to leave a few thoughts about your writing. First off, wow! I can relate so well with this poem, really just grabbed itself a place in my ...

Hey there sandygarnet!! Happy New Year btw! This is a rather intriguing piece you have written. First off, the answer to your question, __________________________________ Confused and lost, she questi

Hi! Welcome to YWS! First of all, holy sh**. This writing is just 100000/10. It was so powerful and sadly enough I related very strongly to everything you mentioned so ...

Hey, here for a quick review!! This poem was really something alright, the detailed choice of words and imagery just bring out your main idea much better. "classes provide mountains ...

Hey, here for a quick review, let's get straight to it shall we?; First of all, wow, instantly this poem has made a huge impact towards me, mainly because I ...

Hey here for a quick review!! First of all I loved your use of sensory imagery which painted a rather dark, eerie and ominous setting in my head and it ...

Welcome to YWS!! This poem is rather short but I loved the last few lines; "Making my heart race His presence I can never escape" Its almost as if whenever ...

Definitely a unique and creative idea to place the words in a particular way that conveys the idea of a blackout. Loved the first few lines of the poem, especially ...

Wow, this is brilliant, you are really talented writers. I loved every bit of it and it was quite impactful to me seen as I have experienced some of this ...

Wow, holy s***. Sorry for my language but wow this is amazing! I was left speechless by the end I love every single aspect of it, your use of language ...

Wow, I am in awe. This poem was pretty deep and sad, well to me at least because I have experienced this. First of all I love your use of ...

These two poems are truly a work of art, it flows majestically well and its just....perfect. I just adore it so much!!!!! Probably my most favorite line in the first ...