ImHero

So I will get very very nit picky with small poems such as this one; this is suppose to help you because small poems need to pretty much be perfect ...

Wow. This is the only poem where I felt the authors anger and sadness in my own fingertips. It is one of those poems that run off the page and ...

Okay before I start I would like to say that the Italics in this writing seem much better then the previous chapter. To clear up my point a little, the ...

Hey, ImHero here to review! So the writing here is not perfect but you satisfied the two main goals: 1) keep it interesting, 2) develop the story. Structure: What I ...

Nitpick: The creep closer to your bed So the flow of them poem is great. Although since you made the last line ryhme with the one two lines above it; ...

From a structural point of view it is written well. It is quite hard to try to hear a song with just words and no instrumental but I believe you ...

Hey a hero here ready to review! It seemed a bit hard to catch a real rhythm. Also words of the poem seemed to be redundant. i.e. "People are crying, ...

YA! For the longest time I felt this was real, and that I could feel the pain. You properly told the world how you felt and its what any inspiring ...

Hello, hero here to review :). Thank you for submitting this because it i good work. However, my first read through was not so rhythmically flowing. first of all lines ...

I don't have much time so I will keep this review to form because it is mainly what is lacking here. It is not bad specifically because content is obvious ...

7/10 This is good mortal! I would like to point out that your ability to transition to a good medafore at your end paragraphs are pretty good. The last paragraph ...

What is the purpose? You explain he is dead but what is a poem without a purpose? Think of a poem as a life, you can live a meaningful life ...

Hey, shadow! I will focus on flow in the following review. Remember my reviews are very bias with what I generally like in context of a reader. Poetry is mostly ...

Hello mortal, time for your review >D overall rating: 2/5 Impression: Needs much improving Description: I gave you a 2/5 because you lacked rythem in your poetry. The stanzas should ...

Hello, mortal. Time for your review >D. Overall rating: 3/5 Impression: good Description: The only reason I gave a 3/5 is because the words seemed to lack specifics and decription. ...