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Re: Affinity 3.4 Girl
Hi Timmy! I haven't read this lovely piece of work for a while and I apologize. But I'm here now. I have beaten procrastination up. I've tied him up
Oct 14, 2014 -
Re: Crimson Tales, Chapter One.
Hey, Raven, dearest ~ I promised a review, and a review you shall get. So... it was weird to think we were talking about this last night xD (or afternoon ...
Oct 7, 2014 -
Re: Affinity 3.3 Girl
Hey, Timmy darling ~ yes, I am here yet again. I must be boring you. Onto the nitpicks! feel my hair streaming out behind me, one reluctant strand clinging to ...
Oct 7, 2014 -
Re: Falling Deep- Chapter 7
So, I was sat here, twiddling my thumbs, thinking: What else to review...? And I almost kicked myself when I remembered. I have read it! I know I had, but ...
Oct 7, 2014 -
Re: Affinity 3.2 Girl
I am trying to catch up with the chapters - I hate being behind. So! I'm trying my best to give you good reviews while hurrying to find out what ...
Oct 6, 2014 -
Re: Affinity 3.1 Girl
Hi, Timmy! I am here and ready to review. Wow. This is certainly an interesting chapter and I luuuurve the new perspective of Girl. I really enjoyed seeing this differing ...
Oct 6, 2014 -
Re: Affinity 2.2 Boy
Hi, Timmy
Oct 5, 2014 -
Re: Affinity 2.1 Boy
Hey Timmy! ^^ Yes, I am back for more! And I see Deanie didn't help with this one. Is it just you from here on and out? So. Let's just ...
Oct 5, 2014 -
Re: Affinity 1.0 Boy
Hellooooo, Timmy and Deanie! Yes :3 I said I was coming since both of you give awesome reviews on Traunt. Wow. Never in my history as a book nerd have ...
Oct 5, 2014 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 3 Part 1
Hey! IamTraunt here for another review! Overused Words could 11. Remove about 8 occurrences from 11 feel/feeling/felt 2. Remove about 1 occurrence from 2 believe/think 5. Remove about 2 occurrences ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 2
Hi! Traunt here from Team Black to review! So, I'm trying a new technique so sorry if I am just babbling. I'm going to split up my review into different ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 1
So.... I said I'd come review and say Hey! to Fay xD Nitpicks! So, many people will tell you that I love talking about sentences and how to make them ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: Jenkins' Law, Chapter 2
Hey Sky! I am here and ready! That morning I rushed through my closet trying to find something appropriate to wear in order to satisfy Angela’s fashion sense. You need ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: Dawn of the Daughter of God-Chapter 10
Hiya, Therese! Your Team Black Cousin is here to finally review ^-^ Okay... Seeing as Timmy and BlueAfrica have already covered all the plot issues, I will be a kind ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: Jenkins' Law, Chapter 1
Hey Sky! I am here to review your wonderful piece of work. I have probably reviewed some of your work before but I have an absolutely terrible memory. So, of ...
Sep 25, 2014
