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Re: Among The Twinkling Stars; 2.2
Hey! IamTraunt here to review! I'm afraid that I haven't read the previous chapters, but I'll try my best to understand. So I figure that there is a freak storm ...
May 29, 2014 -
Re: Network of Keys Chapter 9 part 2; Ky, A Skip
Hey! IamTraunt here to review! Sorry I haven't read the previous chapters, but I'll try my best to understand! Corrections Okay, so I get what your trying to put here, ...
May 28, 2014 -
Re: The Psychic Circle: Chapter 1
Hey! IamTraunt here! Corrections One thing I saw was this: Nikki lowered her head closed her eyes for exactly a second, then opened them sharply and locked eyes with her ...
May 28, 2014 -
Re: Second Always Comes Last: Our Sir
Hey! IamTraunt here! Firstly, I'd like to start with how creepy this was! Which was intended of course. You did a great job. Corrections The word in bold needs to ...
May 27, 2014 -
Re: Things Fall Apart: Chapter Eight: Juno's First Day
Hey! IamTraunt here! Yay! I got here first this time! Now I can say more, heh heh ;-) Corrections I think this bit should be split up. It goes from ...
May 26, 2014 -
Re: Things Fall Apart: Chapter Seven: Asteria's First Day
Hey! IamTraunt here! I have been sooo looking forward to reading this! Corrections So, I know people have beaten me to this chapter - that's my fault because I've been ...
May 26, 2014 -
Re: Final Destination: Chapter 6 Edited
Hey! IamTraunt here to review! I'm sorry I haven't read previous chapters but I'll do my best to understand :-) Corrections The man turns away, ready for his eyes to ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Falling Deep- Prologue
Hey! IamTraunt here! Before I talk about your Prologue, can I just say... OH MY GOSH! I LOOOVE YOUR NIGHTCRAWLER PICTURE! Ahem. Where was I? Oh, right. Review. Corrections Um... ...
May 24, 2014 -
Re: Black Fate Chapter 1 Skyrim fanfic
Hey! IamTraunt here! Corrections "I belive so, I saw her horse." I nodded and climbed back up the small hole and exited the sanctuary. Needs to be 'believe'. I gasped ...
May 23, 2014 -
Re: Blood Red
Hey! IamTraunt here to review! Before I get down to the nitty gritty stuff I just want to give you a tip: I really liked this sentence, but I thought, ...
May 23, 2014 -
Re: Life As A Criminal~ Parts 7/8~ Hard as Stone- I Thought We Were Friends...
Hey! IamTraunt here! Before everything else, just something you need to correct: Of coarse , they out numbered her. ^This needs to be 'course'. :-) "Savvy?" , Caleb said. Then ...
Apr 12, 2014 -
Re: Things Fall Apart: Chapter Six: One Direction and The Voice
Hey! IamTraunt here! Just some things you need to adjust: "Hiiiiii, Frey," drawls the Voice That Haunts My Dreams . Shouldn't be capitalized. Maybe you should put: Hiiiiii, Frey," drawls ...
Apr 10, 2014 -
Re: Green Grass - Chapter 1
Hey! IamTraunt here! Before I go into detail, just some things I picked out that you need to adjust: The Sun was on my back, and the warmth from its ...
Apr 8, 2014 -
Re: Mission Blind Eye: Chapter 1
Hey! IamTruant here to review! Okay, lets get down to business :-) So, I think I understand the concept of your story. I understand that there is a war going ...
Apr 7, 2014 -
Re: Things Fall Apart: Chapter Five: Glowing Stars in a Blind Girl's Room
Hey! IamTruant here! Sorry this is a little late (I didn't have my phone yesterday). I was literally dying to read this! I love your story! Characters: Okay, so this ...
Apr 7, 2014