-
Re: Letting Go (Goodbye)
Your work is amazing! I loved it. I will be watching for some of your work in the future.
Sat Jun 25, 2011 10:43 pm -
Re: deleted
That was a vary inspirational poem. I loved it keep on writeing!
Fri Jun 24, 2011 4:29 pm -
Re: Write
That was an amazing poem. And well written. Keep writeing!
Fri Jun 17, 2011 7:01 pm -
Re: Nothing
That was vary deep and touching. I loved it keep writeing!
Fri Jun 17, 2011 6:57 pm -
Re: My First True Love
I liked how you kept us guessing and thinking that it was like your wife! But it got me thinking when you talked about you walking to her for the ...
Fri Jun 17, 2011 6:46 pm -
Re: Another
Your poem was vary flowing and had just the right zing to it. Nice job.
Fri Jun 17, 2011 6:33 pm -
Re: Take away the pain
Your poem is descriptive which is something I liked. I loved how you explained how it feels to have peering eyes watching you and how it makes a person feel. ...
Fri Jun 17, 2011 6:29 pm -
Re: In The Night
Your poem was beautifully written. It flowed with nice a rhythm and was easy to read. I loved how you compared the objects and sights. Nice job.
Fri Jun 17, 2011 6:18 pm -
Re: The Only One Who Knew You
Your poem was well written. I loved that you the emotions were projected well. And i'm glad you compared the person to something else. I look forward to more of ...
Fri Jun 17, 2011 1:33 am -
Re: Lights.
This poem was amazing. You did vary well and it flows with great rhythm. You had me captivated with the first word. I must say you did excellently. I look ...
Fri Jun 17, 2011 1:25 am -
Re: nothing friendly, nothing pleasant
That is vary dark. But well written and is worded nicely. Despite the darkness of it it was descriptive which is good when you are writing a poem, short story ...
Fri Jun 17, 2011 1:09 am -
Re: Fighting With Tenacity
Your poetry was vary descriptive which I personally had a nice flow and was beautifully written.You did wonderful and I look forward to more of your work in the future.Oh,and ...
Fri Jun 17, 2011 12:49 am -
Re: Musings #1
This poem was amazing.There is no words I find fit to describe of what I thought of this poem.You did vary well and i'll be following your work in the ...
Thu Jun 16, 2011 10:31 pm -
Re: No One.
Your poem was exquisite.I could feel the emotions and meaning you were portraying.There was a nice flow and rhythm.You did vary well.Nice job.
Thu Jun 16, 2011 10:23 pm -
Re: A beauty in a Beast
Your poem was amazing.Personaly I think you did great and don't need have anything wrong but i'm not the best to ask about that!
Thu Jun 16, 2011 10:19 pm
