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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Letting Go (Goodbye)

    Your work is amazing! I loved it. I will be watching for some of your work in the future.

    Sat Jun 25, 2011 10:43 pm
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: deleted

    That was a vary inspirational poem. I loved it keep on writeing!

    Fri Jun 24, 2011 4:29 pm
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Write

    That was an amazing poem. And well written. Keep writeing!

    Fri Jun 17, 2011 7:01 pm
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Nothing

    That was vary deep and touching. I loved it keep writeing!

    Fri Jun 17, 2011 6:57 pm
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: My First True Love

    I liked how you kept us guessing and thinking that it was like your wife! But it got me thinking when you talked about you walking to her for the ...

    Fri Jun 17, 2011 6:46 pm
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Another

    Your poem was vary flowing and had just the right zing to it. Nice job.

    Fri Jun 17, 2011 6:33 pm
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Take away the pain

    Your poem is descriptive which is something I liked. I loved how you explained how it feels to have peering eyes watching you and how it makes a person feel. ...

    Fri Jun 17, 2011 6:29 pm
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: In The Night

    Your poem was beautifully written. It flowed with nice a rhythm and was easy to read. I loved how you compared the objects and sights. Nice job.

    Fri Jun 17, 2011 6:18 pm
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Only One Who Knew You

    Your poem was well written. I loved that you the emotions were projected well. And i'm glad you compared the person to something else. I look forward to more of ...

    Fri Jun 17, 2011 1:33 am
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Lights.

    This poem was amazing. You did vary well and it flows with great rhythm. You had me captivated with the first word. I must say you did excellently. I look ...

    Fri Jun 17, 2011 1:25 am
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: nothing friendly, nothing pleasant

    That is vary dark. But well written and is worded nicely. Despite the darkness of it it was descriptive which is good when you are writing a poem, short story ...

    Fri Jun 17, 2011 1:09 am
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Fighting With Tenacity

    Your poetry was vary descriptive which I personally had a nice flow and was beautifully written.You did wonderful and I look forward to more of your work in the future.Oh,and ...

    Fri Jun 17, 2011 12:49 am
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Musings #1

    This poem was amazing.There is no words I find fit to describe of what I thought of this poem.You did vary well and i'll be following your work in the ...

    Thu Jun 16, 2011 10:31 pm
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: No One.

    Your poem was exquisite.I could feel the emotions and meaning you were portraying.There was a nice flow and rhythm.You did vary well.Nice job.

    Thu Jun 16, 2011 10:23 pm
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A beauty in a Beast

    Your poem was amazing.Personaly I think you did great and don't need have anything wrong but i'm not the best to ask about that!

    Thu Jun 16, 2011 10:19 pm


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