Published June 23, 2011
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I was going to write a really thorough-good review, but I started it, it came out WAY too harsh for my liking, and it all really just boiled down to this:
I didn't like the ending. He got a nice girl to help him? I don't have that so my futures bad?
See what I am saying? That makes your poem much to mainstream and unoriginal. Please change that. I think it's nice if you can write about a dyslexic kid finding hope, and you wrote beautifully. However, you took it all apart by bringing it into the love direction. See what I'm saying?
-Skis
That was a vary inspirational poem. I loved it keep on writeing!
Nice poem .. Nice theme ! !
Brings out all the emotions of the dyslexic boy real well !
The poem reminds me of the bollywood movie Taare Zameen Par !
Keep up the good work !
nice theme........keep trying