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Hey senzafine, this poem is rather vague, but charming. :) "Feel me as you never wanna see me" >Perhaps you might want to rephrase this with the missing modals. "Feel ...

*goosebumps* This is amazing. Just.....wow. I can only hope to write poems as good as this one day. There are a few typo errors though: "...the light of heaven vanishes ...

Well, well...I love the energy and emotion you put into this poem. I could almost feel your youthful blood boiling as I read this. "Her beauty is such a deep ...

Hey there, just want to let you know that I LOVE this very very much. It's sweet and simple but eloquent. Not to mention, close to home. ;) You've phrased ...

Overall a descent poem, but do consider the first four lines. 1. Bangladesh is not "beyond the earth", it's ON earth. 2. Of course it's far from the moon, it's ...

First of all, good job on the title :) I can clearly see how it matches the pattern of your poem. I like the concept of yes-and-no in this piece. ...

Hey there, my review will be split into two parts. One for technicalities, and one for my overall impression of your poem. First of all, let me commend you on ...

Hey hey, don't mind if I weighed in here :) I can't tell you how much the second line speaks to me...it's the personal pledge to go on even though ...

Dear Gravity, idk if I'll be of much help, but I'm going to try. Let's just say I was experiencing the worst 2 years and 6 months of my life. ...

I like the last line. My interpretation of that is that every pulse of breath is laced with depression. The recurring triads, however, (Depression 3x) states the obvious, and reduces ...

Haha....the first 3 quarters did not make sense to me until I reached the ending. Nice one (Y) Overall, a decent piece. My only suggestion is to refine and define ...

Sigh....this brings back many horrible memories of my past. But before I go into that, let me just say that this piece is simple and clear-cut but pretty wholesome. It ...

Ahhh damn this is good. Heh I'm wondering why isn't the title "Unfaithful Hypocrites" instead? :P Nonetheless this is pretty spot on. Could you explain to me why's the title ...

Thoughtful, but lacks maturity. As much as I completely agree with the content, and am also guilty for committing that crime, I think that this piece needs to stock up ...

BEAUTIFUL. I love it. Was able to breathe in the essence of your poem in a single reading. Eloquent. However, I'd suggest replacing words like "trashing" and "deficiency" with more ...