HorriBliss

Hmm... I'm not entirely sure what to think of this poem, but I *did* enjoy it all-the-same. The best compliment I feel that I can give is that the uncomfortableness ...

Great poem, although I don't think I fully understand it, but, no matter, I enjoyed what I understood! I'm pretty sure that the poem is about love, or the "Eternal ...

Just thought I'd tell you that this was definitely an entertaining read, and despite the amateruish way in which it was written, the originality and twists kept me reading until ...

I love the poem, and the sentiment behind it, StoryWeaver, and it's kinda refreshing to see, too; a critique of what is expected of a woman in today's society, against ...

Great poem; small, but packs a punch. The AA-B-CC rhyme-scheme makes reading it a joy, but, as mentioned, the first stanza flows a lot better than the second. The internal ...

The opening paragraph seemed a bit flat when compared to the rest of the piece, usually to convey comfort/discomfort one would mention the warmth/coldness that one feels. Perhaps, you might ...

Oh gosh, I hate to be *that* guy, but did you even proof-read this at all? There are so many grammatical errors that it really detracts from the overall feel ...

Hey, raised by wolves, I'll try to cut-to-the-chase and give you my two-pence on this piece. My first impressions were that it was a fair poem, expressing a sentiment that's ...

Hey, Piegeon, I loved this sonnet! I've been toying with the notion of writing one myself, in fact, and I have a vague idea in mind, but putting pen-to-paper has ...

Great little bomb is how I'd describe this piece. That's literally all I could say about it. It's a great little succinct piece that sets out to say what it ...

Absolutely wonderful piece, a delight to read. It starts well, draws you in, holds you and lets you go... before you want to dive right back in again, that is! ...

This was great! Usually my reviews would be longer and find tidbits to scrutinise but this piece is just so succint and blunt that I really can't do that. Extremely ...

I didn't personally like the poem, but it does have strengths so I wouldn't feel too disheartened. Before I go further though I'd like to reiterate that my review isn't ...

I don't have anything else to add to what dragonrider has already said. A decent little piece but it needs some work. Don't be disheartened though as we all have ...

Great little piece you have here, it got to the point and drew me in excellently. I liked the fact that the action always moved forward and you didn't describe ...