Horisun

This is soooo relatable! I love how you list all the reasons why pens are amazing, and then finish it with why you never use it. Throughout the poem, I ...

Hello, LukeRH! This poem was done really well, and I really feel the emotion behind this piece. It had a nice flow, and I didn't see too many technical errors, ...

What the... what the... I- I didn't expect that. I didn't expect that at all... I seriously expected the other dude to be the villain, now I'm feeling really bad ...

I have a feeling, a small, aching feeling, some friendships will bloom, and some will go boom! War. War. It's coming to the dragons. At their core, they're war torn. ...

Hey, Sheildmaiden! Pesky writers block... It sucks! But at least something good came from it! Aaaaaannnnnnnyyyyway, onto the review. So, I liked the word choice, the spelling and grammar was ...

Hey there! Hope you're doing well tonight! I am here to review your work! I really like your rhyming scheme, and I also really like the flow of this piece. ...

What's that? On the Horisun? It's a... It's a... Review incoming! So, let me start off by saying that this was a really nice chapter, Ndutu is adorable already, and ...

Hello, IcyFireyPheonix! It is I, Horisun, doing a review, of course. So already this story could go in many different ways. I'm excited to see what your story has to ...

Hello! And welcome to YWS, I hope you love it as much as me, and others, do! I really like the poem you have here. The word choice was really ...

Hello IcyFirePheonix! (Yes, if you are okay with it, that is what I am going to call you, :D) I hope you are having a great Review Day! Reviewing this ...

Hello seekingthetruth. I agree with JJDodd, the content of this speech is important, and it's something people should think about more often, as we all need to pitch in to ...

I would wake up crying if I had that dream... (Shivers) So, I didn't really expect a poem, but I think surprise poems are the best poems. I really liked ...

Wow... That ending was sad... ): But it was incredibly creative! Like, it was sooo interesting! I've heard so many stories about robots taking over the world, but I've never ...

Wow... That took a turn... That was NOT what I expected, at all... Like... Wow. That was one of the most well done plot twists I've seen in awhile. This ...

Hello, RainbowCereal! My name is Horisun, and I'm here to steal your cookies! No, sorry, obviously not, I'm here to review your work. Which is really great! I love how ...