Horisun

This piece is very thought provoking. I like the idea behind this, and I like how you phrase things. Your grammar seems pretty solid, however, make sure you uppercase the ...

Wow, this is intense in a good way, the tone of this is incredible! I mean, the actual situation is definitely not great, but looking at the writing aspect, you ...

Hello! I hope you're having a great day so far! And if not, maybe this review will make you feel a bit better. A very interesting start to a story, ...

Hello! It is I, Horisun, which is pretty amusing to me because my username is just a misspelled version of Horizon. (I did that on purpose, I promise I'm a ...

Hi! Welcome to the Young Writers Society! I hope you grow to love this place as much as I have! This story was really sweet, and had a great message! ...

Hello, Pepper1313, welcome to the Young Writers Society! I hope you love it as much as I do! I'd like to start by saying that this story already seems very ...

Hi Liberty! I'm here to review your work! I'm already hooked on this story! Sooo many questions! Which is a good thing! Overall, this was a very smooth read, and ...

Oh my gosh! I need a moment to gather my thoughts... Oh my gosh! What? You know, the plot twist with Snape, and Percy Jackson being the son of the ...

As I promised, I'm here to do a review on the next chapter! I am very interested to see where this story goes. I'm very excited to continue reading, as ...

Hello, Asith! I'm here to see if I can assist you getting this piece out of the green room! Charge! Anyway, I really like this piece. I really didn't expect ...

Hello, Anamel! I'm here to review your poem! (I mean, duh, me, what else would you be here to do?) Let me start by saying that I really like your ...

I've only read this first chapter, and I'm already interested! I found the dialogue very interesting. It makes me assume this is set way back in the past. But then ...

This poem is beautiful. It flows flawlessly, and you've managed to capture so many feelings into so few words. I can tell just by reading this that they were important ...

What's that? On the Horisun? It's a... It's a... REVIEW INCOMING! First, I just want to say, you did a really great job on this poem! The flow is spot ...

I have a question for myself... Why did I think it was a good idea to read this well I was hungry? *Leaves keyboard, and goes to the kitchen**Comes back ...