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Re: Untitled Short Story Part 1
Hiya! I hope you are having a good day or night! Right off the bat, let me just say I thought this was rather exceptional. Something about this concept immediately ...
Jun 2, 2022 -
Re: It’s all a bit tragic isn’t it?
Hiya! I saw this in the Greenroom, and I remembered your name from all the kind reviews you've left me. I figured it was about time I returned the favor! ...
Jun 2, 2022 -
Re: Our journey to happiness (chapter 1, part II)
Hello! I hope you are having a good day or night! Getting right into it, it's great that Alexis has made a friend. I really like the idea of Nayomi ...
Apr 29, 2022 -
Re: Our journey to happiness (chapter 1)
Hello! Welcome to the Young Writers Society! I hope you're having a wonderful day :D This is an excellent start to a story, with lots of pieces already set in ...
Apr 29, 2022 -
Re: Dear Professor Caesar
Good afternoon! I hope you're having a wonderful day so far! I really enjoyed the premise of this short story! Am I correct in assuming that it is based on ...
Mar 3, 2022 -
Re: The Living Room
Hello, and welcome to the Young Writers Society! I hope you are having a good day or night! This was a really cool concept for the short story! I liked ...
Jan 10, 2022 -
Re: The True Throne (Chapter 3)
Hey! I hope this review finds you well! First things first, sick map dude! Not only does it look great, but it's actually really useful when referencing the different Kingdoms. ...
Jan 9, 2022 -
Re: The True Throne - (CHAPTER 2)
Hello! I hope this review finds you well! Sorry it took me awhile to get to this; I've been a tad bit busy in real life recently. Overall, I really ...
Jan 7, 2022 -
Re: The True Throne (Prologue + Chapter 1)
Hello! And welcome to the Young Writers Society! I hope you are having a fantastic day or night! Right off the bat, I just want to say, this was an ...
Jan 4, 2022 -
Re: new year or infinity? you choose
Hello! I hope you are having a wonderful day or night! First off, I really enjoyed the visuals you wrote out to describe the New Year. They both feel very ...
Jan 4, 2022 -
Re: Merrow's Lullaby
Hello! I hope this review finds you well! Goodness, this story hit me in the feels! Honestly, I enjoyed every aspect of it. The way you handled exposition here was ...
Jan 2, 2022 -
Re: Resurrection: A Tale of Brave Football
Hiya! I hope you are having a good day or night! I really enjoyed reading this piece of yours. Even though I've never been one for sports, I always really ...
Jan 2, 2022 -
Re: Banned from Existence
Hello! I hope you are having a wonderful day or night! Not that time matters anymore, it seems. This was an incredibly clever short, and I was enthralled from start ...
Jan 2, 2022 -
Re: The Dream Hunt: Prologue-part 1
Hello, and welcome to the Young Writers Society! Right off the bat, this was a great start to your story. I have a lot of questions regarding who the monster ...
Jan 2, 2022 -
Re: Catastrophic Pain
Hello! And welcome to the Young Writers Society! This was an all-around incredible poem, with powerful visuals and a somber message. I enjoyed every aspect of it. I read it ...
Dec 30, 2021
