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  • Short Story » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Untitled Short Story Part 1

    Hiya! I hope you are having a good day or night! Right off the bat, let me just say I thought this was rather exceptional. Something about this concept immediately ...

    Jun 2, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: It’s all a bit tragic isn’t it?

    Hiya! I saw this in the Greenroom, and I remembered your name from all the kind reviews you've left me. I figured it was about time I returned the favor! ...

    Jun 2, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Our journey to happiness (chapter 1, part II)

    Hello! I hope you are having a good day or night! Getting right into it, it's great that Alexis has made a friend. I really like the idea of Nayomi ...

    Apr 29, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Our journey to happiness (chapter 1)

    Hello! Welcome to the Young Writers Society! I hope you're having a wonderful day :D This is an excellent start to a story, with lots of pieces already set in ...

    Apr 29, 2022
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Narrative Re: Dear Professor Caesar

    Good afternoon! I hope you're having a wonderful day so far! I really enjoyed the premise of this short story! Am I correct in assuming that it is based on ...

    Mar 3, 2022
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Supernatural Re: The Living Room

    Hello, and welcome to the Young Writers Society! I hope you are having a good day or night! This was a really cool concept for the short story! I liked ...

    Jan 10, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: The True Throne (Chapter 3)

    Hey! I hope this review finds you well! First things first, sick map dude! Not only does it look great, but it's actually really useful when referencing the different Kingdoms. ...

    Jan 9, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: The True Throne - (CHAPTER 2)

    Hello! I hope this review finds you well! Sorry it took me awhile to get to this; I've been a tad bit busy in real life recently. Overall, I really ...

    Jan 7, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: The True Throne (Prologue + Chapter 1)

    Hello! And welcome to the Young Writers Society! I hope you are having a fantastic day or night! Right off the bat, I just want to say, this was an ...

    Jan 4, 2022
  • Poetry » Realistic, Health Re: new year or infinity? you choose

    Hello! I hope you are having a wonderful day or night! First off, I really enjoyed the visuals you wrote out to describe the New Year. They both feel very ...

    Jan 4, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Merrow's Lullaby

    Hello! I hope this review finds you well! Goodness, this story hit me in the feels! Honestly, I enjoyed every aspect of it. The way you handled exposition here was ...

    Jan 2, 2022
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Resurrection: A Tale of Brave Football

    Hiya! I hope you are having a good day or night! I really enjoyed reading this piece of yours. Even though I've never been one for sports, I always really ...

    Jan 2, 2022
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: Banned from Existence

    Hello! I hope you are having a wonderful day or night! Not that time matters anymore, it seems. This was an incredibly clever short, and I was enthralled from start ...

    Jan 2, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Dream Hunt: Prologue-part 1

    Hello, and welcome to the Young Writers Society! Right off the bat, this was a great start to your story. I have a lot of questions regarding who the monster ...

    Jan 2, 2022
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Catastrophic Pain

    Hello! And welcome to the Young Writers Society! This was an all-around incredible poem, with powerful visuals and a somber message. I enjoyed every aspect of it. I read it ...

    Dec 30, 2021


When a body moves, it's the most revealing thing. Dance for me a minute, and I'll tell you who you are.
— Mikhail Baryshnikov