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Once again, job well done Ms. Creativity. You was able to capture my imagination and make me hold fast to every detail and word you put into this story. I ...

A little confusing but I am sure you meant for it to go that way. Love the mysterious flow you used and your ideas for this poem gives it a ...

Lol, you already know I like this story and believe it or not you are becoming my new favorite author. I love the way you put these ideals together and ...

Lol, so did you just off this poor guy in this poem or am I reading this wrong? Honestly I feel like this is something my mom is going to ...

Lol, so I interpreted it as though god was speaking. You that is cool that you are showing that kind of Idea in your poem. But I say one part ...

SO I go from reading about children with super powers to a place that imprisons cheaters, gangbangers and ect. Well I am glad to see you are what me and ...

wow, okay so once again you have my attention in your book......thumbs up. Not a lot of people know this but writing is an art and Ms. CreAtivity whenever you ...

Well this is a little different from what I am use to reading from you.....I do not know what was the message you was trying to give but I can ...

Interesting concept you have here Busy Body. I like the flow and the dramatics you have for this piece, and your words do match well with the flow.......but I just ...

Lol you would never get to stay at my mom with a room like this......she been done had a nervous break down. Alright first let me say this poem is ...

I think I understand this whatever it is,(I have no Idea what a monologue is) tell me if I am right though. I feel Like you are saying every one ...

This poem speaks volumes. It shows that even someone as fantastic as you ms. Busy Body can go through the roughest of times and still bounce back. I loved the ...

Lol, So I see you two like to play on the dangerous side of Christianity huh??? Now you know for a fact I would love this sonnet simply because of ...

Dang so who killed the husband??????? Lol hi Tuesday I like the poem and it was worded very good. But who killed homeboy Harry???/ Did he off himself or did ...

Lol, you got me again......although I think I like this one more then the others, I know you was looking for a confuse type state but I honestly grasp what ...