Hassanfs

Hello. So I have mixed feelings about this poem. I like the theme the poem carries along. Life being compared to the wild, and the dangers and fears that one ...

Welcome to YWS! I liked this poem. The imagery you created was very good and I like how the words used were just adequate, like you didnt try to force ...

This is so far the best poem I've read all month. Amazing. The flow was very good and pacey in the start. It had me gripped. It did somewhat stutter ...

Helloo. I liked how you used the repetition effect so beautifully. Usually it annoys me, but in this poem it worked perfectly. I loved how the colour of the sky ...

The flow was very good throughout this, which was vital for such a poem. I like how it's pacey but not too pacey and not overdone. So kudos on that. ...

I really enjoyed reading this. Was feeling a bit stressed after a really long day battling chemistry, and this worked wonders. Made me calm and relaxed and I could feel ...

Wow. This was a great piece of work. The fight scene was very well described, and I felt like I was in the middle of it all. Throwing the punches. ...

Hellooo Hassan here with a review. So what I think about this poem is that the people "destined to kill me" is you as well. The narrator him/herself is the ...

This was amazing. I LOVED HOW IT ENDED. amazing work . Would love to see it turned into an actual song. An alternative metal kinda thing. Would be amazing :'') ...

Hellooo. Nice poem. The flow was consistent, and though there wasn't a set rhyme scheme, it worked well. My favourite lines were : "Saved by grace, my soul has been ...

I usually like poems that are vague, and tough to understand, but this was a bit too cryptic. I couldn't form an interpretation of my own. But this was well ...

Why does this have so many likes but not any reviews???!! This is a truly beautiful poem. It had a very calming effect on me. My favourite bit was : ...

Wow. I absolutely loved this. The imagery you created was sooo amazing. There isn't a specific rhyme scheme, but the flow was good and well maintained throughout the poem. My ...

Was looking forward to this ever since I read the prologue. Once again, you created the atmosphere very well and the insight into the killer's mind was very good. I ...

Helloooo. Here again with a review :D So I loved the way you divided the poem into the " I came, I saw, I conquered" way. It was different. And ...