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Re: Deadline
Hey there, Pternoha. This review will focus mostly on where you should go from here. This is a strong piece, and I want you to make the best of it. ...
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Re: The story of Scar
Introduction: Hey there, Maddie! I just want to start by adding a disclaimer: this review is going to be short, to the point, and focus on the literal content of ...
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Re: Knives
Hey there, Chaser. I want to talk about this poem. Although I don't just want to talk about it from a literal standpoint, but also from a contextual standpoint. Basically: ...
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Re: Bareface
Introduction: Hey there, teammate! I have to tell you something: I've never done this before. I've never liked a short poem to the point where I'm going to do it ...
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Re: 42
Hey there, Wanderlust! In this review, I'm just going to be reinforcing some of the others points. Let's get started, shall we? Okay. Like fortis said, I don't want to ...
Aug 30, 2015 -
Re: Roger and I...
Introduction: Hey there, DarkDewDrops! I'm being torn away from my computer, so this going to be a short one. But I'll do my best to help you out. :D Ready? ...
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Re: Turn Everything Over
Introduction: Hey there, Tiger! I can't wait to start reviewing this piece. Because of its length the review is going to be shorter and sweeter than normal. ;) I want ...
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Re: Inky Love
Introduction: Hey there, teammate! I can't wait to review this piece. In this review, I'll be spotlighting a few suggestions that mainly have to do with word choice, fluidity, and ...
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Re: how can God be dead if dead birds still breathe.
Hey there, James. This is going to be a bit of an unconventional review, because this is a bit of an unconventional poem. how can God be dead if dead ...
Aug 30, 2015 -
Re: The Silence Between You And I
Introduction: Hey there, Summer! I love this piece and I can't wait to add my voice to the discussion. Due to its short nature, I'll be keeping this short-and-sweet, if ...
Aug 30, 2015 -
Re: The Tree
Introduction: Happy review day, fellow Zenith-er! Just a warning: seeing as this is just a paragraph (although an excellent one, at that), I'm going to make this review short and ...
Aug 30, 2015 -
Re: Self ish
Introduction: Happy Review Day, Dr. Writer! (Nice username, by the way.) I can't wait to review this piece. New YWSers often have the most novel work, and this is an ...
Aug 30, 2015 -
Re: marinescence
Introduction: Happy Review Day, fortis! You know I always enjoy your poetry, and this is no exception. Just a quick disclaimer: this review will be shorter than normal due to ...
Aug 30, 2015 -
Re: Copper Dust: Chapter 1
Note: this is one of my entries for the Big Review. Enjoy! Introduction: Hey there, Wolfie! So, when I first started this review, I tried to do what I normally ...
Aug 11, 2015 -
Re: The Phoenix
Note: this is one of my entries for the Big Review. Introduction: Hey there, Arkhaion! I can't wait to review this piece. It's one of your best works, I think, ...
Aug 11, 2015
