HaleyPenguin

Wow. Talk about speaking the truth of depressing life. I found this to be really good. I love how it's all in the center of the page. Also, I like ...

hm. This was very interesting. I liked it quite a bit. The story seems to cut into the deeper meaning of life. Do we really know what or who we ...

HAHA! I love this so much! Short, sweet, and to the point. And the ending. I wouldn't expect you to say "have a good day." I expected something along the ...

Hello svwiener! First off, i have to say, the title peaked my curiosity, so good job on that. I love the way you wrote this, and how it has two ...

Hello :) First off, I have to say, I love your name. Second, great job on the title, it was a real attention grabber. I like the haiku style of ...

I liked this a lot. The detail is so beautiful! I loved that so much. That is the best thing about poems. The little hints of detail the writer puts ...

Hmmm... I thought this was rather interesting. It's a little different from what I'm used to reading. First off, I have to say, that title you chose, talk about amazing. ...

Wow... I have to say, I really liked this! It's very unique. I mean, it's not everyday I go to read a story or something and see an interview instead ...

This, to me, seems rather unique. While reading, i knd of came up with my own beat to it, and it seemed to stay consistant throughout the entire poem. It's ...

I like this quite a bit. I thought your wording was done very well, and the entire story was pretty interesting. “How do I know you’re real?” “How do I ...

This was really well done. I thought it was a very relatable story. I can relate to this rather well actually. (but that's a story for another time.) I thought ...

Hello :) First off, I want to say that I loved this! It's short, but to the point, and it flows very well. And you didn't seem to get off ...

I loved the title to this! It caught my attention immediately. I thought the topic was very unique, and you played it off as if it was an every day ...

Hello there :D So, I thought this was very well done. I loved the title, I thought it was very eye catching. The story flowed very well and you didn't ...

This was done very well. It gets people thinking, when was the last time I faced my fears and taken the consequences? It's pretty rare for that to happen. The ...