HaleyPenguin

Haha! i love this. Simple and adorable. A true love story! I honestly can't express how much I love this. It's just... It's like my life story! Just kidding :) ...

I love this! Way to speak your mind! I'm absolutely in love with this. I love the unique form you put it in. Granted, it's a little hard on the ...

LOVE THIS Title: first thing that caught my eye This was beautifully written and flows very well. The imagery you used was done very well too. I'm not one to ...

Wow... This was done really well!!! Lately I've been reading a lot of poetry, and I have to say, this one is one of my top three. I like the ...

This was beautiful! I loved every last line! The imagery was amazing and the way you worded everything was perfectly done! All the little details you put in really made ...

This was rather interesting. Very unique on your part. I thought you did really well on this. The style is really cool. I like the way you worded the poem. ...

Hello :) I have to say, I liked this quite a bit. I liked the topic you chose and the way you talked about it. It was very interesting. It ...

I love this! I don't normally like plays, but this was done really well! I'd definitely pay to go see this! You used great details and imagery. It was almost ...

The emotion in this was amazing. In just a few short sentences, you made so much emotion, it's outstanding. Also, I don't know if you meant to do this, but ...

awww, how cute. I love how you look more at the sentimental value of love instead of the gifts and price value of love. FINALLY! Someone else gets it that ...

I love this. It's really cool to learn where things came from. Well, at least in my opinion. I've always wanted to learn more about Valentines Day, but I had ...

hmmm. I like this, but to a certain point. I like all of the dialect, the comedy, and the theme isn't bad. What I don't like is that there isn't ...

AHHH!!! This is gorgeous! The visual in this is AMAZING!!! I love the dramatic effects you used. The imagery is beyond amazing. You should be really proud of yourself for ...

AWESOME!!!! I love the description you used. It really did make the story feel more real. Like the reader was there with the characters. I don't really see any grammatical ...

I just... I can't even describe how I feel about this. All I can get out is how great you did. The structure is great. The idea was unique and ...