Hello, queerelves! I'm emeraldfox, representing Team EarthBenders this Review Day!
Wow. What a powerful, amazing poem! The formatting and informal, incorrect use of capitalization, spacing, and punctuation made this piece so raw and unedited, like you were just spilling thoughts and passion onto the page. Your meter was so strong and your rhyme worked so well, too. You took readers through anger, sadness, pride, happiness, and just amazement in this piece.
I felt so much emotion reading this poem for several reasons. The first reason was that your word choice was so strong and breathtaking that I was enveloped in the meaning of the poem. Secondly, this poem had so much LGBTQ+ pride that I was really happy to read. And finally, I could connect to this poem at a very personal level because as you stated when you said, "i didn't pick/to be/This way/but you bet your ass/ i wouldn t/(won t)/change it", even though I din;t choose to be lesbian and it isn't as easy as being straight, I wouldn't change it for anything becasue that is who I am and I'm allowed to be proud of myself and who I am.
Of course, you did have spelling, grammar, punctuation, and capitalization errors, but they were intentional and they helped the poem so much, so they shouldn't be changed.
This poem made me cry, actually, but in an angry, yet happy way. SO MUCH EMOTION!!!!! Really though, this was such an amazing and powerful poem and it is probably the best poem I've ever read. I hope you write some more poetry soon because you are SO good at it! Urghh you just make me really happy and now I'm just rambling on about how great you are... *likes*
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